Heart Problems [v0.8 Final] [Xenorav]

with so many requests in comment box, the author should atleast update on next episode here.

Recommended. So many steamy erotic scenes! I took a ridiculous amount of screencaps while playing this one. A ton of content, also, even though it’s still in production. The quality gets better and better as it progresses, as well. It’s not w/o bugs and typos, o/c, and many scenes could have a better erotic angle, but it’s still one of the best.

Note to developer: While I understand why you may wish to have the women initiating sexual things in order to avoid any possible ethical ambiguities, it also unfortunately results in creating a Beta Male. No one likes an MC beta male. No one. Think about it, neither men nor women players like them. For the scenes to be good, you need to have the male initiate everything. Everything. Everyone will be unhappy if the male MC is not an alpha male, and alpha males initiate everything, with the result of much more erotic scenes. Near the end you were getting better at this, but man, there were, way too many scenes where the women are sickeningly having to initiate everything. Those scenes are pretty much nauseating. And, yes, I think it worth going back and redoing the dialog for them. Keep the image scenes and just change the dialog. That should be enough. Afterall, your VN is good enough that it deserves to be made one of the best.

Which leads us to the last thing. There are still a lot of family-relationship variable errors. Throw the dialog into a text editor and do a search for all relationship words (daddy, sister, son, uncle, dad, et al, ignoring caps) and make sure they are using the player-set relationship variable instead. Example: there was a ton of “dad Davie” in my play through. Also, you need to take out all the “my” before the relationship variables too. It’s better to read just “Uncle” than “my Uncle”, because it causes problems when the player wants the relationship to be something like “Dad” or “Mom”. Also, lastly, I made the two younger girl’s relationship “Sisters” and that variable was misused about 3 times, so you may want to track those instances down.

Great work, though, so far! Cannot wait for the next chapter!

One of the most overrated games on this site. There are some crazy people here who even say it’s the best game they’ve ever seen. They have never played anything else or they are truly absolutely insane. This is full of rendering problems, from start to finish. Starting with the MC’s serious problems in the first episodes where he presents design errors, notable for the skin spots on his head in some scenes. Yes, that can happen sometimes, but under no circumstances can you be so lazy as to let the problem show in your scene and not fix the character or the scene. And of course from start to finish the white dots in the scenes, including animations. Those white dots are another sign of extreme laziness. It is also something that usually happens when rendering, but it is easily solved within DAZ 3D itself or when editing the image. Hell, even with Paint 3D you can erase those white dots.
And why are we going to talk about the plot… There is no plot so it is impossible to talk about it. In fact, the point comes early where it doesn’t even have decisions. Everything becomes a carousel of images with texts so boring that it is not worth reading them.

Waiting for chapter 9🔥