Welcome To Hell – The Vampire Chronicles [Remastered v0.2.0] [NoobPRO Games]

was supporting the dev on patreon but after he started “remastering” it and at a Insanely slow pace i stopped. ill sign back up in 3 – 5 years when he releases chapter 8.

To the Dev:

If you’re going to make an independant faction – fine. BUT you don’t force the Player to be in that faction automatically.
You let the player CHOOSE. There’s no need to make the beef wall. There’s no need to overcomplicate the story by splitting up the first girlfriend and turning them both but with TWO DIFFERENT FACTIONS!

There’s no reason to have Harem in the tags if you’re constantly going to make the player pick which freaking girl to go with, and it costs points with another; that’s NOT harem. That’s a freaking dating sim. If you can’t tell the difference you’re in the wrong job. There’s also the point that there DOES NOT need to be lesbianism implied or realized between ANY of the girls that WILL be in the Harem, especially once they are confirmed to BE in the Harem. That just confuses the issue. Because the girls’ focus in a HAREM is SUPPOSED to be on the MAIN CHARACTER.

You do not need to make the mystery girl who fucks his mind about whether she’s available to be courted or not, or ANY fucking consequence to doing so. At all. You do not need the three girls that are supposedly so damned worried when MC goes missing, bad-mouth him while trying to search for him for Christ’s sakes. Have you ever heard of Tonal Dissonance? Because that’s mixed AF messaging. It’s NOT harem. So really at the end, DO. YOU. WANT. THIS. GAME. TO. ACTUALLY. BE. A. HAREM??? Answer that question at least, and maybe… just maybe you might end up making a story that sometimes, at some points, MIGHT make sense. Until that point, I’m not bothering to download this. Because it SAYS Harem – and then every time I try to earn points with a girl (who really don’t seem to be all that interested in BEING THE MC’S GIRLS btw) I end up having to choose between one or the other. Harem is you collect them all. Without cons to trying. Earning a +1 to any girl should NEVER cost me -1 to any other girl. For any bloody reason.

There’s also fuck the whole Ancient vampire taking over MC’s body (Diablerie should NEVER have been necessary to the story – and it’s actively insulting to both the player’s effort and the MC) Fuck the idea that Ghoul boy was EVER that necessary to the story, to create so large an albatross around the MC’s neck. Fuck the idea of the schizo battle form bullshit – he should be strong enough to win battles by GRIND and training IN GAME. Jesus. Fuck the whole two moms thing, and both of them have fucked MC, but each of them still wants to pretend they’re bloody married. Just come the fuck on man. If they’re willing to fuck others, it’s NOT a true marriage. Or it’s a DYING marriage. Also, Fuck the idea of the base girlfriend NOT seeming like she even gives a shit that her boyfriend MC isn’t as dead as she thought [and DOUBLE FUCK ALL OF THE LESBIAN BULLSHIT YOU’RE TRYING TO PULL WITH HER!!!] * In a HAREM: the main girl should automatically JUST focus on MC. If you fail at that why the fuck are you even designing this game?!?

There’s WAY too much in this game that’s either much to convoluted, or actively punitive to the player. There’s A LOT more to fix than you seem to think. But good luck, and if you manage any of what I’ve said here I may come back and actually want to download more of this game. Up to that point, it’d be a waste of my gigs. I’m not sure what you want to really do with this story but if you keep up where you were going with it, then as far as I’m concerned and I’m sure I’m not the only one, it will be unsalvageable.

This game is really good…..Can’t wait to play the ending of this game (whenever i say i want to play the ending of a game i means it is an amazing game)