Love Season: Farmer’s Dreams [v1.5] [MuseX]

After further playing; I will thank you for at least FINALLY letting Nina break up with Trevor, but damn dudes… did it really have to drag for like 5 chapters? Come on. Still going to point out that by now the MC should be aware of his ambitions enough to know that he wants a harem. He doesn’t have to admit to the girls that he does (though I’ll expect you added Nova as a wingwoman to that notion… so you might want to work on her starting to help with that – also he does seem to have a death wish, so maybe go ahead and let him admit it to Nina. She already must suspect it by now. I’m not a masochist, but then again it’s not my eye she’ll likely blacken; just before she admits it IS kinda hot to think of MC doing to other women, how she feels when we go at it) You really should add Harem into the tags by the way. There isn’t one for dating sim, so again… do NOT make the player choose between any of the women. Or make it seem like the women he is currently fucking (no matter how many that might be) are not invested in a relationship with him. Even just to talk it out. They can pretend, but it should be obvious to the player that they really do want to belong to him overall. Also, and as a huge red flag (hair) to the storm coming; do NOT make Nina go back to being a cock blocked witch WHEN she finds out exactly how many women MC has been with. Or is doing, and wants to continue with. She wants to be one of them – I even got to fuck her ass while she was sending Trevor away [Mostly because she didn’t want to get caught, but I DO give you props for not making her hit MC or bitch him out – even if I think it was more raw surprise and confusion that stopped her on that point]

Do recall, these are real people you’re fucking with here. No, not the characters. The one one the other side of the MC’s eyeballs. He is our avatar. So whatever you do/say about him, many of us WILL take personal. Having the girls treat him like shit even if they are DTF – after a VERY long haul in some cases – is no bueno. Having to make the player choose when the game previous was a harem game with a HELL of a lot more visible mechanics (though again, fuck RPGMaker man… I will always prefer Renpy for a great deal less complication to my keyboard) which helped you see where you stand. [The heart system for your girls/the Good + Bad choice in colored wording when it applied] There really doesn’t need to be a girl who is off limits. Unless the player chooses it to be so. I am glad that you did finally semi resolve the Nina issue, so I will continue to see where it goes. I’m just hoping you don’t turn Nova into a true to her namesake. As far as MC’s love life goes. By which I mean of course; don’t let your self insert or really any of the girls cock things up by acting too realistic. Most of us in reality either can’t get or may not be able to keep a girlfriend for the whole of our lives [Not an insult to anyone; look at the statistics on divorce, and it’s predominantly the female that calls it quits first] There’s no place really for a bitch fit walk out because you’re seeing more than one girl in a harem game. So please, for the sake of our sanity, don’t ever go there. The angel and the demon are freaked out enough. [Are we ever going to get off the fucking farm and become something else, or is that part more meant to symbolize MC’s delusion? Cause really at this point it could go either way is all I’m saying – the two of them need to do more in game than just say “your choices matter from now on” when in fact there’s no current visual representation that they affect MC at all] It might be more prudent to decide exactly what you want the MC to actually become. Brainstorm the possible endings and offer the player a choice about the path they’d like to see that you’ve come out with (that again should be comprehensible without a bloody walkthrough mod) * I’d still vote princess open to an open marriage, with whipped cream optional and cherries on top (What, it can still be a bra)