Adored by the Devil [v0.7] [Empiric]

Having played through to the current end; still think it should properly be a harem.

Also think if you’re going to talk about pregnancy at any point you need to be willing to pull the trigger, and fuck off with any comment by the girls about birth control. The sorceress wants him so badly; she can risk having his kid to actually keep him (it’s called BLOOD and or Sex Magic, they exist. You have a perfect out in a fantastical sense to make her willing to risk what others wouldn’t for the RIGHT reasons) In a fantasy setting, especially since it’s unlikely that I will ever hear a woman tell me she wants me to finish inside her if I can get laid, by this point: The LAST thing I want to read is “Don’t come inside me.” You do realize you are fucking with a fair few boners from your audience with that bucket of cold water, right? Immediately killed my immersion in the story for how much you’re trying to build up that all these women want to chase him.

* I do grant points to the potential reason, that also at least explains the horse cock. But it does bring into question the younger daughter – as well as one about the MC that I’ll try not to spoil. How valueable is Pure Blood? (I mean the Japanese do have a thing for it, so really it’s your ball and your court how far you go. You do share about MC’s father, but you don’t mention a heirarchy in HIS path. Only the girls – I sense a possible Deus Ex about it, and I’d warn not to over rely on that style in writing)

I DON’T agree with the explanation for the Mom’s tits. I don’t know or care if it’s a real thing; too big is too big. If there is such a thing as that rare genetic defect it’s called Breast Reduction Surgery. She would have needed it by 30 years old to save her back at the very least. It would perhaps also pass on to her daughters. There’s also how in the fuck does she let one of her daughter’s fathers be what he is, and the other somehow ends up being entirely different. Now she’s chasing the MC – and you DO NOT EVER make any of the women in a (unlisted – but technical Harem Game) stronger OR more powerful than the MC! I don’t care if they are equally powerful down different veins, but most guys won’t fuck a girl they are terrified to piss off. Any more than most women would fuck a man they were scared would rip them apart. Go fuck yourself with that line of “female empowerment.” It’s not. They will NOT chase someone they either know, or even suspect is weaker than they are. So FIX THAT. ASAP. I do not care if her blood is “royal” you haven’t stated clearly that his is not.

The best path at the end for my two cents would be they are all HIS, and ALL pregnant. Any girl you add in should eventually be an accepted part of the Harem and subject to this. I don’t even care if you mark that point his greatest “power.” (which would still be viable as it is affected by player choice and can be argued entirely under their control) Because nothing else makes sense. The game should not need a walkthrough. Just color code the answers and ASK the player at the beginning of the game if they want to see hints. Those that don’t, don’t have to. Those that do, will get the help they may need to find proper answer through otherwise questionable context. [It’s a problem I have because sometimes you guys decide to make the RIGHT answer something that would absolutely get the MC slapped by a real woman, for whatever reason] I won’t say this is bad – though I will say that if the Vampire wants to Fuuuck, so bad… she needs to also be in the harem! – but there is some work that could be done to improve or clarify story elements. Nevermind telling me her power could rule the world if she wished; if it’s fucking over her life, it’s not power. It IS a curse. There is a difference. A power, you can control. This… is what it is, and they’re all playing hermit the secret frog princess to a prince that’s so far not all that charming.

no one cares bout your stupid harem, you pathetic rainbow bitch.
you’re a perverted marginal minority. period.