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The Will of Endreon [Ch. 2 Part 1] [Hidden Dreams]

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Editor's Rating

Story - 91%
Visual - 89%
Engagement - 89%
Core Loop - 81%


out off 100%

This review is based on author's perspective and actual experience may differ on individual's own preferences.

User Rating: 4.58 ( 13 votes)

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  1. The story has potential, but the MC seems to be a useless pushover. Even if he isn’t powerful, he could at least have some self-respect.

  2. Would also highly recommend either tagging FemDom since you seem to be stupid enough to go there… or Toning WAY the fuck DOWN on Nia. Frankly with most girls that Blunt (and it IS blunt; not Dominant. There is a difference and if you’re going to write those characters YOU as the Dev should know that) The MC and the player (most of whom will want to BE the Dominant, and are male) will straight up tell her to fuck right off. Suggesting that she’s willing to bone but not tie down with a relationship ALSO does not put her in the best light. How about = if you want to keep eating the meals I cook, you can fuck right off and show me the proper respect girl? : / [There is always MORE than one way to show power. It’s not always about Magic. He has a useful skill set – even if his prowess as an adventure lends the tale with him as the center to as yet be complete bullshit unless you actually GIVE him some real fucking power… AND STOP TRYING TO MIND FUCK YOUR AUDIENCE!!!] * If that is how you as a developer intend to get your jollies, fair game. But I can tell you it won’t do you any favors to gain Paetrons.

    It DOES NOT matter how attractive you draw them, if their personality is absolute shit. FemDom with NO CHOICE about turning the tables or not, IS NOT attractive. >.< So you can either soften the character by giving the player the right to choose how that relationship will go in ALL veins, or you can watch probably most of your player base hoped for drop off a cliff. Do you even know how many of us are tired of the FemDom troupe? It's in every third game it seems. Jesus. You fucked up by naming this game "The Will of Enderon" and then making the MC a fucking bitch boy chef. That is massively stupid, unless you are intending a lengthened HERO'S Journey that teaches him to become the bad ass (and bend EVERY. SINGLE. BITCHY. FEMALE – WITH NO CONSEQUENCE – OVER A TABLE by the end of the game) It's really not that hard to craft a good story. There's an element of power fantasy involved to most of them; and you shouldn't be catering to the LEAST common denominator.

    That thing with being a chef I could get over. Starting as everyone's bitch – I can deal with = IF You as the DEV treat the character with proper respect. Let the Player actually choose the Path, and frankly EMPOWER THE MAIN CHARACTER. Who is ALWAYS the one that the player sees the game through. If you wanted the MC to be Nia, fucking make it Nia. If you want it to be warrior dude – make it warrior dude. BUT: Do not deign to ask the MC if he wants to learn to fight without actually asking him if he does, and THEN make it so the player has no choice because you want to call Cook Boy the ball-less wonder. No one is going to sign up for that for very god damned long bud.

    1. you’re a rainbow freak, super-unique snowflake, how the hell could you have any idea about what drives people to become patrons?

    2. Wow , That was quite a read.
      I must say , reading this damn comment made me more entertained then the game itself.

      I agree with him Mr.Dev

      The Mc seems like a pussy with no Ball…

      Wait , that came out wrong.

      Anyways. Get the bitch boy some charisma.

      The story seems promising but honestly I don’t care much about that,

      I like that character Autumn 🍂
      So I wanna see more of her

      It would be nice if she stays a good girl and doesn’t ends up becoming a whore.

  3. If you’re intending to introduce paths with multiple girls Dude; hopefully you don’t intend to punish the players that want to see all Lewd Content (Build relationships with ALL the girls : / ) Also, lay off insulting the Cook. They should know better, since A) what he makes still needs to taste good, and B) There’s always poison. [There’s no reason to be a dick to the player, which IS what you’re doing when you insult the main character as much as you have right out of the gate.

    * The curse could also LITERALLY be passed because He. IS. Enderon’s. Blood! Beyond that, not cool to start with time pressure in a cursed hero troupe. He started as a cook, so if this was a harem it would make sense he was the most OP asshole by the end. Hopefully you’ll follow at least that point in the story. Not every tale needs to have 666 bad ends to make it interesting or “dark.” So far, from the little I’ve played you’ve got a hill to climb as far as the actual MC to keep me invested. (There is a reason most stories stick with one: Defrost the ice queen and make it possible to chase her – the big brauny guy should be death flagged about the point MC actually starts learning to be able to handle himself = that could also be the beginning bonding point with Nia… Just a suggestion) * Also, if you’re going to do monster races, fine. Just don’t make all of them male in the party. You want to do adventure, that’s different than romance. One gay or bi option would be fine as long as it’s a CHOICE. Most should be females since you made the player avatar male by default. Also, if you’re going to have the purple haired elf (who should not be consequenced if I chose to not tell Autumn about her – because I figured you’d cock block me for doing so, and that’s STILL a dick move either way) tell MC that he COULD be a great warrior for the Kalesi… with or without the dragon, then FOLLOW UP on it! Don’t just make that a fucking platitude. That would piss most of your audience off.

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