The Point of No Return [v1.0][Final] [DS23Games]

For me, the problem is why involve Autumn at all?

The two mains – fine. I still think it’s BS that there IS NO Resistence route. Not really; what you get is a Sarah Conners’ Chornicles attempt, where she needs all the help in the world (to very probably STILL end up fucking other men than her husband) to save her daughter who’s very likely STILL being raped daily no matter what you do. Alongside Autumn. The only difference being Jen doesn’t participate. In this last route of “Submission” (which is usually fully consented by the way – and Duress BORKS that – made her throw away the ring. Chris gets killed for trying to do what Stan did; which is incredibly hypocritical. Autumn however SHOULD be claimed by Stan. You went there in the first place and while it would make a dark one, it still does make a harem. Meek and petite of frame does NOT mean will let any overmuscled asshole fuck her brains out. Make her hit him with the frying pan until HE dies… and set to another running path. Where Stan really DOES fuck all of them.

Major points (other than the obvious, this game is JUST about rape) I have a problem with:

– Thematically there was no reason to get Autumn involved (and it actually creates a situation where they would be more likely to get caught. Was she the type to run away? An ophan… you put in the cucked boyfriend who frankly wasn’t getting anywhere with her so he was more a beneficial friend she wanted to believe she loved = If she truly WANTED him, they would have fucked at least once. Her parents at least would have by now called the cops. If it’s a point on the back end you want to introduce as a parachute… fine. Short sighted not to include some means to think there will be an end point that resolves this for the VILLAIN. But fine)

– Resist doesn’t get you anything different. Trying to resist after going sub (or literally letting Stan make you his whore) do not offer significant improvements or alterations to what you obviously intended to be a Harem Game; darkly.

– There is no end in sight. So while I can’t fault the work done, compression may be more viable. Splitting it into 3 paths when really there is only 2 and both will end badly for Jen no matter what you do so there may really only have been the one considering you don’t see what happens to Maya during most of the separation thus far in the Resist! mode, still equates to a bad end. There is no way to get back the lives they’ve lost. But on a side note; you painted Maya as a willing enough slut that she would have been MORE the draw to defend as a virgin. She did NOT need to be more or as sexually experienced as her mom. I would have put her as still technically a virgin (and no anal bullshit) but having gone further with her boyfriend than Autumn with geekboy. They could have broken up over her “not being ready” but still being willing = which makes her come off the cock tease who’ll put the brakes on whenever things get really good.

– Overall, it’s the same game down three slightly different veins. You can’t really fight the NTR and come out safe. You can’t go back to the marriage no matter what. Because Jen’s not going to want to fix things with Andy given what she had to do to protect their daughter while he was fucking clueless. ( “Strong/alpha” women do not tend to regard men like Andy is portrayed sexually – so the only way you fix this is he secretly had more money than god; or a way to make her effectively immortal & turned back to her 19 year old version. Which could be a deal he was working on that pans out = and I would if you REALLY want to be a dick at the end, have ANDY be the mastermind of the whole thing as a trust test, or have him be the ringmaster above all, who re-takes ownership of his very confused wife at the end JUST to prove to Stan and whoever else that HE can protect/own and control her mindset over LITERALLY EVERYTHING ELSE. It’s one way to add a Machiavellian twist and fix the marriage. It’s not the best way, but better the devil you didn’t know you never knew – and gave your heart, than the asshole that tried to rip it out and mindbreak you)

– You are effectively tying an anvil to the feet of all these girls, and at the end of the day, it WILL get boring to most of your audience. You won’t want to meet the ones it does not bore in real life, I promise you. So I’d work on a way to resolve this thing at the end. Cleanly. Either for light or dark as one true path. I’d also make certain that all three girls are CLAIMED. By ONE man. I don’t care if it’s Stan, or whoever else ** Unless you go with Jen’s whore path, in which case fine and have her try to save the girls she cares about by pushing them into it too. She hasn’t been smart about literally any of this so far, so it at least fits that ** [But again, it could be the Evil Andy’s way of sharing that he wants more than he thought Jen would accept… so he’ll end up with Autumn, Maya and Jen all pregnant by him at the end – because they’ll willingly abort whatever Stan may have put in them, or make him Sterile by Andy’s design without him ever having known it. Either works] Accept that you made a Harem. It’s not a flowers and rainbows type of harem and frankly you’re portraying them to all be bipolar fuck anything that wants to whores at the end. But it’s a Harem. Especially if you add in an older cousin to Maya (or Jen – or even Autumn) that gets mixed up with them.

– Without some actual means of progressing their ability to fight for their independance, or to at least SEEM to, there is no real question as the one that originally drew the audience in. They’re not fighting. They’re not even capably shown that they CAN on the version of playthrough they’re supposed to have. Frankly, in Resist! Maya and or at least Autumn should have joined Jen in that resistence. There’s no reason really for it to center on just Jen. Autumn had a BOYFRIEND to face down – and I don’t think she’s going to after this, because again he’s going to KNOW she was forced to be impure. So he’ll either go dark and treat her just as much the slut to reassert his Dominance (which we both know he never had to begin with) or he’ll give her to the streets. That’s the choices you left that pairing with. So for what she’s gone through, in seeing him UNCHANGED – because he’s still going to be that worthless stringbean looking motherfucker and we both know it – she’s going to disregard him. End of. There’s one way it ends well for them as a couple, and that’s IF you make him accept being a cuck and she promises to give him only her wildest self. JUST. HIM. But even then there will be a vein of distrust that puts the relationship at risk of constant fracture. She fucks up on that point even once and you’r right back to give her to the streets. Or she’ll walk out for self-justification in “Female Empowerment/Sexual Liberation” which is basically code for let me be a slut and fuck a football field, while I pretend I was ever loyal to you, or loved you.

At the end, even if you fight – you break these characters. So it’s up to you guys if you want to waste now almost 15 Gigs watching rape scenes. Because there never will be a Happy Ending here; that doesn’t push out a baby in nine or so months. Probably for the rest of each of their alloted fertile times. : /