The Mason Gambit [Ch.10] [CorForce Productions]

Okay ASSHOLE; and yes. I am Canadian as well. I agree, we’re not always polite. Especially when it hasn’t been earned in kind. I don’t give a flying fuck which of the three services you SAY you’ve served in, or whether you actually WERE in the Canadian Armed Forces at ANY point. Which frankly not one of us can verify and do you know how many yappy dickheads make that exact same claim online to sound tough? No… take a wild bloody fucking guess.

What I DO care about is the fact that with all your Puritanical bullshit written as an intro; you fucked up the save that I had from the end of last update, and rolled back to the BEGINNING of the game (Which you also wrote as an Amazonian/Berserker + Every Other Guy in the world is IMPOTENT – HAREM!!!) So that stuff about sticking to your wife… if true and that’s your thing; fine. That’s YOUR thing. It does not have to be the story you tell. The narrative DOES NOT have to follow your fucking values. Which just so we’re clear I think you’re very fortunate to have found, and would like to myself. I do not however enjoy being moralized to. Especially not when you made the first girl MC fucked end up sounding at first like she hated him. Like she WOULD HAVE fucked around. The story you are actually writing, if you haven’t mucked it all around to conform to your own world view at this point, DOES NOT stick to your professed fucking values. Or it would not be a HAREM. It doesn’t matter if it’s not in the tags. It’s discussed and considered thoroughly in the game (Though again, I’m pretty sure you’re going to dick us around because the MC’s a “Good Boy.” Which means Scooby only gets one Snak. Because “Word of God” sez so. M’Kay? I can see that bullshit coming a mile away…)

Except you did not want her to behave like 90% of “modern” women. Do you know that the average age a girl has sexual experience statistically in the US is 15 years old. By more than 50%. So you can call the Main GF modernized all you want, and it’s a lie. Which IS extremely awkward writing. Which is what most of us have criticized. Aside from the lack of sex scenes. It’s fine that she is more traditionally minded according to you in that she waited for MC; but someone like that WOULD NOT share. Which would be required by the Harem Genre. The convoluted inclusion of a mother who’s not MC’s mother, and sisters who aren’t MC’s sisters is also just a way to blue ball your audience. Do note: I am not saying you haven’t served, or bled for the country or whatever patriotic rhetoric you’ll use to defend yourself. I happen to be 4F or I would have tried to join you. I am saying it’s just words without access to your actual military record. Which no one in their right mind would expect you’ll give out. So talk tough all you want – and watch how many subs you’ll lose for trying to play the drill sargeant. In a game that is ALREADY convoluted in story line. Dripping with Feminist bullshit politics, and trying to be modernized as much as draconian. Your tradition system does NOT mix with either the genre or the politics you’ve written for the FEMALE characters. There’s also no pregnancy as yet; which would happen eventually. But at the glacial rate you’ve chosen to involve sex the girls if it was reality would be too old to go there by the time MC even admits that A) HE. HAS. A. HAREM! (whether he wants it or not is besides the point – THE PLAYER does, I can almost guarantee it if they’ve stuck with your story through all the BS this long) You can be an ASS and make MC deny it. We can’t stop you if that’s the endgame you want, and we’re all VERY well aware of that point. But again, as much as you want to play the chained pitbull in the yard warning intruders off: YOU. ARE. CHAINED. TO. SUBSCRIBERS. They very likely pay for you to create this long winded, antithetical annoyingly SJW story. They will likely be what allows you to complete it. So you ARE beholden to some degree to listen to their constructive criticism and their bought in suggestions for content. If YOU can’t HANDLE that… then maybe find a new job. Or re-enlist, maybe that’s where you’re better off.

Because fuck me; there’s only so much damn patience I’ve got. I played this damned game all the way through to the last update – and while there were certain points in the story that did very much grate, and were awkward as fuck, it wasn’t all bad. A little too blunt in some areas, and way too inclined to blue ball for being uploaded to a SEX SITE (by which there are implied expectations within any given content) but NOT bad. Just likely never going to be all that great. Given the pacing, and the fact you can’t seem to decide whether you want the girls and the MC to be in danger, or super powered or not. I will NOT be playing through this again because you fucked up the coding for a god damned vitriolic way too personal message that FOR THE LAST TIME: No one can verify. So that’s me tapping out. Because the red head may be hot… but as far as I could tell, she was a cock tease the whole time. Not worth the investment, and especially not with the attitude you just dished out. To what you should have assumed would either be new fish who might bite, or loyal fans who wanted to see you succeed. Come on Dawg; don’t you know what happens when you bite the hand that feeds? Keep this up, and sooner or later, you’re going to find out.

Feel free to call me an asshole. A yappy little so and so rando on the net. Or ignore me. Tell me I don’t know what the hell I’m talking about, call me a virgin, or an incel. You’d have no more way to know if it’s true than I do about your claims. Though I will say as my final point, if you don’t know what I mean by 4F, you weren’t in the military.