My Brother’s Wife [v0.10.0] [Beanie Guy Studio]

Some ideas you can use – and frankly don’t have to; so consider it more entertainment – to properly structure the story.

* The older brother Alan should be about perhaps 12-15 years older than the MC: This would explain his more self involved, lone wolf, do what I say & it’s all about me mentality. He had a good chunk of time where he was the only child. (I believe you didn’t state what age the parents were when they died, or that it was recently as a development from the start of the story, so it can work)

* The wife of Alan (Jessica/Jennifer?) should be no more than 28 years old. Alan can have married her for the trophy wife/home maker + good for my image type. The MC should be around 22-24 (he just got out of high school? I’d go just got finished a decent degree in college – that way you can let the player pick what kind of job the MC might want = Give the player a few set builds to help work to the end goals)

* The structure of the game in earning points should be fine as is: but you should make the bars for set developments in lewd sphere more clear. Like I said, I’d go Love Vs Rival. Wherein Rival is about Controlling her. Rather than she loves MC enough to do it. Calling it hate is too negative. She may not like that you control her; but she is willing to allow it. There should be a few break points based on your choices during key events. Like the drunk night where she kisses MC [and REALLY in some part of the back of her head you should clarify that she’s at least semi aware this ISN’T her husband. Because people will forget between updates] Or for example the time she jerks off in the bath right next to MC while he’s showering. Don’t just say she thinks he has a horse cock, make her want to do something about it.

* There’s a couple ways to approach the brother; but I’d argue friendship isn’t one of them. For the base reason that Alan brought MC into his home on the basis of a debt that wasn’t real. You reveal that the PARENTS always intended tuition be full paid; so either Alan took that money for his own use and possibly to get ahead at his job – impress Wifey – OR Alan was taking credit that wasn’t due, and MC SHOULD rightly be able to either directly call him out… or use that point against him with the proof he’s now downloaded. To perhaps tip the crux point with Wifey into you’re going to do things with me. Either because you realize your husband/my brother is an ass now, or because you want to “protect” him [And eventually will get to the point that as the massive slut she’s trying to escape being aware she still is, she does in fact enjoy being controlled]

– As to the other women: There should be no consequence to pursuing them that dents the relationship with Jen. Period. You can accomplish this by two points. That would also work off the Love/Rival system.
* A) Jen will over time – but not Too Much Longer – in the story realize it’s the MC she does in fact genuinely love. To the point that when she finds out about the dirty dealings on top of the mistreatment and ignorance, it will be the last straw. [I would leave actual divorce and marriage to the MC as ENDGAME content] She will begin an illicit relationship with the MC; but since she still has to maintain the commitment with Alan, she will make a compromise. She will never fuck anyone but the MC again, and if MC is willing to let her watch/participate lightly, he can fuck other women because technically he must remain for now “Single.” You can and probably should also ellude to her being a bit of a voyeur, which Jen would never have admitted to Alan but will feel safe and loved enough to share with the MC {You could make Bella have import as means to push Jen into this path; and if MC does get Katherine she can play FemDom with MC’s allowance to Jen to help force her into this path – with the end goal being Jen marries MC with Katherine and everyone else eventually pregnant and happily tied to MC in an “extra carricular” Harem Marriage. They can all hand-fast to him as a commit point.

OR

B) Jen is on the Rival path to the point where MC controls her in every way sexually. He is the Master. She is the Slave. So she can be a little jealous/possessive of “their” special time, but MC does what he wants, with anyone. Because Jen should know he OWNS her by the time the idea of genuinely pursuing others as well comes up. He can also turn this to his favor with Katherine (as her Dom – especially if you’re going to force the issue of MC possibly becoming the same fucking thing as his brother : / ) and Katherine may with MC’s allowance or not, claim a part ownership as Jen’s Domme. Bella would get involved because she’s “liberated” enough to be that adventurous. I admit I’d actually do away with anyone else. The next door neighbor as a cougar isn’t appealing, if you don’t pursue her, her daughter is just trouble waiting. The Car broke down single mom is too much reality in a fantasy game. However, I would stipulate that if the daughter can dettach from Mommy cougar, she’s fair game. If the single mom ends up being willing to leave the tater tot with Gramps in order to gain a real invested relationship (so the player does not deal with the consequences of THAT parenthood beforehand) then both are better candidates for the Harem that can be.

For Jobs: Becoming Alan part Duex should absolutely be avoided if you want to at all respect your audience. Aside from the one point of claiming Alan literally couldn’t get it up (which fuck off and stick with that – since it makes it easier for us to deal with since you didn’t list NTR and I would hate it if it came to that, as she SHOULDN’T be getting sexual with anyone but MC) The main gripe she had was Alan’s massively shit work/life balance, out of her favor. So if you’re going to make MC the businessman, make him better with mousetraps. Let him realize that if he wants to keep a happy wife; there is only so far one needs to “succeed” to be successful. It’s not all about money, and it never should have been. Let them live as comfortably as currently shown {And key point if you do allow MC to Dom Katherine, she is the Boss’ daughter – so do NOT fuck that relationship up for any reason. Let her help him financially for the sake of THEIR family. Because yes. All of the girls should be sexual with MC and all of them should be pregnant at least once by the end of the game} but not so far up the rungs of “success” that MC starts treating his new wife like his brother was before he lost her.

He could be a genius programming consultant. He could be a mechanic that ends up making bank with his own business. A personal trainer that Katherine’s connections will catapult to franchise ownership, OR the businessman who never needs to go bigger than middle rank. So long as you end the game with MC and HIS family happy and healthy most of us would consider the rest a decent time investment well rewarded. As I said, these are just suggestions. You don’t like them, you don’t have to agree with them. And no, I’m not saying my way is right or it HAS to be a harem. I am however going to reiterate that I’m getting a bit tired of getting blue balled by the title of the game. These would be decent paths to help you fix the issue, and make progress. Not the be all, end all. Either way I’m good to wait for at least one more update. But if you can’t make more progress within 2 new updates, than just letting MC in the middle of the night halfway play with her tits under a night shirt… then I think I’m tapping out.

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