Editor's Rating
Story - Fractured Realms, Initial impressions reveal a lack of substantial character development with the potential love interests , leading to rushed and questionable interactions. For instance, encounters with the maid and the female orc feel rushed and devoid of meaningful connection. Nonetheless, the inclusion of a feature allowing players to choose their preferred Love intrest adds a redeeming element, giving players the freedom to create their desired harem. - 71%
Visual - Fractured Realms boasts decent but not outstanding visuals. The renders lean slightly towards a darker side, which may affect the overall appeal for some players. The animations, while acceptable, do not reach the level of excellence found in other games. - 74%
Engagement - The game manages to keep players engaged to a satisfactory degree. The charm lies in the - 80%
Core Loop - Fractured Realms presents a promising core loop, albeit with certain reservations. The gameplay revolves around building relationships with the Love Intrest and exploring the magical realms. While the immediate infatuation of the Love Intrest can be forgiven given the harem premise, it is crucial for the game to offer meaningful character development and emotional connections as the story progresses. The successful execution of this core loop will determine the game's longevity and appeal. - 75%
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This review is based on author's perspective and actual experience may differ on individual's own preferences.
Welcome to: Exposition – The Game
god srsly, its just an endless string of exposition and the dev has some serious issues with brevity.
if your world is this freaking complicated, maybe think about which information we actually need.
or pace the flow information better. i just ended clicking through all those needless explanations.
“keep it simple, stupid”
otherwise the game is actually pretty interesting, even if the mc is a pretty dumb most of the time.
the girls are pretty much all likable and the plot kept me hooked enough to keep going.
id say its worth a try
lame boring ass story with more than a few inconsistent parts MC is a for lack of a better word a dumb pussy ass fuck boy every VN this MC model has been used in has turned out the same way the LI in this are kind of boring the sex scenes holy fuck the sex scenes are garbage the animations are ass the way they have been done is retarded having to go back and pick a different option is moronic I would say if you enjoy even a slightly good story don’t bother with this if you come for animations def do not download this if you like a MC who is not a bitch do not download this, this right here is not worth 75% this right here is worth 30 to 40% at best do not believe the ratings on here every one of them is wrong
There is one point I will state is a bit skewed, or rather incredibly unclear and counter intuitive (even if it is a decent, messed up explanation for why the Main human LI wants to share the MC)
* You state at one point later into the story that Nicole (whose name I changed) had Ovarian Cancer = had Chemotherapy.
Now there is a point here that depending on the severity of the cancer, the amount of rounds and the meds used (it’s all toxic – which is why it works on the cancer) you will be sterilized. Atop that you claim she had surgury to REMOVE her Ovaries. Guess what you need to actually BREED…
This wouldn’t necessarily present a problem (but I hate when harem games include one girl that literally cannot breed if they’re going to involve pregnancy) BUT you also have a scene when the greater spirit can join in with Nicole after their first meeting, and “recharge” MC’s magical energy. I chose Nicole, because I’d already impregnated the spirit and wanted to do the same to Nicole if possible. I did NOT know at that point you’d later write in that it SHOULD BE IMPOSSIBLE!!!
The choice therein says “Guaranteed Pregnancy.” How?!?
I’m willing to make suspension of disbelief a thing that says maybe his magics healed her ovaries to regrow them. There’s also the point that while I do understand psychologically that she would break up with MC because she knows he wants a big family, and feels like she failed him. Failed as a woman – but it’s really rather obvious she didn’t WANT to break up with him, and doing so actively shot her in the foot more than it helped anything. Point being, she did NOT need cancer. I speak as a very recent survivor myself. You never, NEVER need to go there in the story. I get there was supposed to be a good reason they split, but that can be done emotionally. Time of stress; immaturity. Financial concerns etc. You gave him a fucking fiancee we’re probably never going to meet (and given her backstory never should…) so you should know it doesn’t have to be a dicey disease that CAN kill her; and by the way so can the chemo. There’s statistically a 1 out of 10 k shot it just straight up kills you right off before it can do a damned thing to fix the cancer [My aunt also actually died thanks to complications from Ovarian Cancer a long time ago – so it hits double hard and has NOTHING to do with escapism. Or a light hearted fantasy like the genre of harem is generally SUPPOSED to be]
You need to be clear as crystal about HOW the fuck Nicole gets pregnant – and while we’re at it, whether or not MC is going to end up a God? You cheated to give him a unique ability = there was also no real reason you couldn’t have outright stated he was simply a demigod himself. One that DOES have the power to ascend, since you state he’s more powerful than any being or god in the first realm he travels to. Also – Fuck Charles telling me not to want to be violent with him. Fuck the cinder haired chick being such a bitch if we’re going to bend her over a boulder to breed at some point anyway. Tsundere REALLY is NOT endearing. So make like her element and MELT that. Fast. She’s obviously the one you said we should trust, and Charles is not. Guess what I’m NOT doing if you keep using her to threaten MC?
Other than that, and Dari being such a bitch in general – Knife throwing is not okay, if it’s not open to BOTH genders. You know damned well he’s powerful enough to choke slam her into the wall and say the next time you try that, I’m going to skin you. He’s probably powerful enough to make her blood literally boil in her veins. Maybe make SOMEONE point that the fuck out, before I lose patience with the twit and stop pursuing her period.
This is a decent start to the game. I’d like to see it continue, and I’m very pleased with the amount of control you give the players with pregnancy as an option. I very much appreciate that. (I also bred the orc as soon as possible lol) Keep up the good work. Fix the few minor issues, and it’ll actually be one of the best harem games I’ve played so far.
Okay, there’s going to be egg on my face; but you really shouldn’t have textbox transparency set to clear as the automatic if you’re going to make so many backgrounds white at the same time you make the writing white. You wouldn’t need a text box at all if you’d change the color of the writing. I do however recommend people NOT be like me; and change the textbox to all the way left, rather than the right. You’ll actually be able to write the writing that way. Assuming any of you actually care to, that is.
First, not real sure I appreciate you plugging for your other games in the TV if you do have other games.
Second that Charles guy looks like you ripped off the MC of Sorcerer and Tribulations of A Mage – who are effectively the same damned character, which is a problem with that author’s works; so I’m surprised that didn’t get a call out…
Third: Please JESUS allow a change of the color for the fucking writing – at least twice now I CAN’T SEE the goddamned dialogue because you put it to white… and the bloody background it falls on is ALSO WHITE!!! Go Red, or blue or Green Orange, Violent – Go fucking Turquoise, or Indigo for all I give a shit. But there’s no point in writing a damned thing for dialogue if people CAN’T READ IT. That choice at the maid Cafe after you ask if I’ve seen Nicole in the maid outfit I couldn’t figure out if I picked a good answer, because I literally could not actually see her response. Nor half of Charles’ introduction because the floor of the backyard was again, bone white. : /
Fun story which most fantasy buffs will enjoy. Most of the women are attractive, 4 are gorgeous. Definitely play this one for the story though. Would give the story thus far at least 80% with the potential for 90%+ as it develops.
What story.