The Last Challenge [v0.2.0] [LustyDonkey]

While we’re at it – Having Tiny Tim or whatever the fuck you called him point out that “Ji Yeuong is-” was massively assholish of you. For two larger reasons: First, it implies two possible highly negative things MORE than it might imply (given the tone of your plot thus far – and the way you’ve set out every goddamned girl to have already been taken – or the town doorknob; which by the way is NOT fair to Ariana) anything good.

1) She’s dead. Straight up, and the more likely to provide a chance for closure.

2) For any number of reasons (WHICH SHOULD NOT BE THE MC’S FAULT IF THEY MEET AGAIN!!!) She’s just like the others. Already not a virgin [Yes, asswipe, that for at least ONE girl IS important if you want the Harem Audience to invest in any of these characters] or involved with someone else. Whether against her will or not won’t matter to us. It DENT’S her fucking character.

Here’s how you can possibly salvage this confused mess so far. Especially if you want to EVER make it an actual harem:

– Layla NEVER gets to hit or be pissed off enough to scream at MC again. NO MATTER WHAT. If you want her to be Main Girl; fine. But she’s got to ACT like she’s worth more than the others. She’s got to PROVE it. She will let MC bend and BREED with any female he wants, even getting to the point of ENCOURAGING him to do it. Because “The Race needs to Survive; and we’re all that’s left…” Justification, I don’t expect it to be a literal truth. [Any female MC wants also allows that any MC the player DOESN’T CHOOSE ON PURPOSE would be left to the other males to claim, so no it’s not going to be a giant ball of Fuck Me Daddy in the literal sense one day] Harem does NOT mean fuck everything that moves… and that is the reason I will say Fuck Right Off for Rosaline.

– Ji Yeung is NOT replaced by Joona. She IS a VIRGIN; and I will get to that… and she VERY MUCH STILL LOVES MC. To the point Layla WILL push herself in competitive fashion to MATCH the girl. In order to earn her actual place in the harem (That Ji will legitimately WANT MC to have) Joona will probably tag team with Ji in order to force Layla to adapt to what they want. [Joona could also be useful as the ‘resourceful listener,’ who proves that she isn’t just a pretty face by being the scavenger kind who survives by being as situationally aware as her language barrier has forced her to be within the group]

– Anette and Brenda for certain will go along with Ji & Joona; as this is their shot to be with MC as well. Without getting their shit kicked in by Lexa. You’ve set up several characters at least being moderately invested in MC, so they’d go in for the Harem notion because they DO see MC as their “best option” and a better choice than their current paramours. [Perhaps owing to the idea they chose their SO because they didn’t believe they’d deserve MC, as much as they had no chance to try with Lexa playing Cerberus]

* Big sis redeems herself by having grown the fuck up during the outbreak [Probably because she saw their mom get raped/bred on in sexual servitude to keep her family alive/taken from their family; or and their father die. So Heidi and she had no one to protect them. Enter Ji… and the three of them rely on each other to fend off all comers. Raven will be the one to take on any sexual necessities to get their needs met – since she KNOWS how important Ji is to MC (Whom she will be as in love with – but won’t have known how to show it and or be doomed to believe it wasn’t possible IE she acted out like Layla did…) and she will end up being the responsible protector of Heidi & Ji. [It’s not perfect, and she WILL be scarred… but it’s how I’d draw back those who’d write her character off, for the shit you pulled in the prologue] Raven could also pair up with Joona in order to keep her safe while scavenging, and do the same with the others, to ease MC’s concerns. Her way of making it up to him.

* Heidi can be the way Tiny’s phone actually worked (tech whiz kid) or really anything else besides the cloud coocoolander, that would actually be useful to the Harem in this situation. Every. Girl. Needs to have a function to the group; beyond just getting bent and bred (BY THE MC. Assume that’s what 99% of your damned audience will want to see) Frankly she should ALSO be a virgin; because no one else ever met the bar of her Big Brother (I’m NOT doing the “Onii-Chan” bullshit, but hey… if Ji’s an influence lol) ** The virginal “Protect The Cinnamon Bun” type is a big part of how you endear the audience if you make everyone else too flawed, or too grating. They ARE important to a long term project where you’re relying on players’ financial investment. [Especially since “The Virgin Bride” is becoming way too much of a fantasy concept these days]

– Each girl that’s already taken should have a clear break off point with their SO; either because said superfluous dick will die protecting them/being an ass who doesn’t listen to MC’s advice, or just randomly will die and or be maimed. Your flavor of how much of an edgelord asshole you want to be to your characters. They will end up in sexual relationships with MC – either out of genuine attraction in realizing their first choice is not capable as a leader in this situation, or because MC IS capable as a leader and they sacrifice the sex/investment over time to break current relationships overall, to survive. Again, it wouldn’t be that hard. Those that want the NTR content still get it (Netori is still an avenue for the Harem Crowd) and it fits into your overall ‘the world is fucked’ narrative. [If Covid had been more deadly, it would’ve been SARS and we all survived both, with SARS being more deadly statistically but lingering far less time = your plot is thready at best… BUT you can work in the idea that labs designed it to basically be Darwin, and leave only the strong alive. IE MC and all the current females, since the best genetically were never targeted. Hence the other men will eventually die off… and ESPECIALLY Donnie for FUCK SAKE!!!] So the disease was never meant to be a world ender… it was meant to make the remaining populace stronger/achieve a new bar for Humanity yada yada.

– Donnie needs to die. Straight up. The only reason he’s there is either a very obvious self insert character (who we NEVER needed to see naked, or fucking ANYONE. Ever. Jesus) OR your fucked up sense of humor. He isn’t useful to the plot if you’re going to add a hotter version of him before we even see how fucked the township is (It should also NOT have been a choice of fucking Brenda or her – and it SHOULDN’T have been a choice between money or the box of Muffin cake things = IT. IS. A. HAREM! It’s literally right there in the tags) You could’ve made him the tech geek, buried in the basement too focused on porn/Hentai to see most of the females that MIGHT have given him a shot and while that would be brutally on the nose, at least it takes him for the most part OUT of the plot and also makes him useful. It also wouldn’t come off as necessarily the self insert.

The game isn’t without potential – even as mangled as you’ve started the entire concept this might ever be a harem… but the key is Endearment. You’ve got to give your audience a point to INVEST in. You have females that literally have ONE positive trait in a list that’s about TEN long. Actually that’s pretty much all of them. If you’re lucky. There are several that have NO positive traits, at all. No Bueno. Frankly, that shows more your own misogynistic tendencies pal. I’d check in with whomever wrote your characters thus far, and seek to make improvements. Does not matter how physically attractive you render the girls (and MOST are mid at best by the way) if they’re all of them selfish and or greedy, potentially violent, assholes.

It is optional. I didn’t select the anal with the girls that offer it and it doesn’t penalize you if you creampie or pullout on the girls with just doing vaginal sex.