The Roommate [v0.11.11] [togs]

Okay, you REALLY don’t get what a Harem entails do you Dev???

First: Kiki is RUINED as a character worth investment because you made her the town slut who’ll fuck anything that walks.
(That is NOT what Submissive means; and in a relationship – which is what CHOOSING TO MAKE HER SUBMISSIVE IS SUPPOSED TO ENTAIL *** And ALL relationships have SOME level of exclusivity but ESPECIALLY the “Master/Slave” kind you dumb fuck!!!) so fuck you very much for that.

Kari does NOT need experience with Aria; who didn’t need to be fucking Shae BEFORE she fucked MC – It’s a HAREM game you dimwit! – Shae didn’t need to take Aria away from the roster for 6 months = Dumb writing, screws over player choice. NOT EVERY FUCKING GIRL IS BI. That includes what you did with Rei and Kayla.

* The focus of this game SHOULD BE ENTIRELY on the MC. Fuck “non-exclusive.” the MC has the kind of money where all of the girls won’t expect HIM to be exclusive to them (it’s not in his nature and they all know it, and you’ve made most of them incredibly passive aggressive about it) BUT he has enough money they want/need in order to make THEM ENTIRELY EXCLUSIVE TO HIM! If they’re going to constantly expect him to bleed money doing things for them the LEAST they can do is be ABJECTLY LOYAL. That’s what a harem is: you absolute dunce. I don’t need or want to see two of the MC’s girls going down on each other. Calling Aria a “dyke” when Kari should know that MC has fucked her consentually at least once is stupid writing = which would NOT be necessary or true at all if you’d just left Shae as open to MC’s advances, the same as Aria and had the foresight to ASK beforehand in the beginning of the game if WE AS PLAYERS WANT TO SEE THAT KIND OF FUCKING CONTENT! I don’t care if they are Bi; but if you want me to believe they’ll commit to ANY kind of relationship, focus on the MC. Alone. Period. Bisexual people DO usually have a gender preference to their partnering. Fucking other girls can be a shared fantasy, and it NEVER needs to be more than that. Remember; he has the money. He has the power. He can tell them all to go jump off a short cliff and find women that WILL play his way. That’s the character you wrote, with the situation you put him into.

So yea. This is my last update. Whatever you do with this game; good luck. If you’re going to turn every girl into a “cock hungry slut” (and by the way – Kari’s response SHOULD have been: I need HIS dick in me. I love HIS dick in me. There is a point where for HER COMMITMENT to the relationship to be properly shown as the girl you’re pushing so hard SHOULD BE MARRIED: you needed to have her make that distinction. A because it’s possessive, and allowing HIS possession of her body, and B because it’s LOYAL. Again, writing is not that hard. Fuck me…) then there’s no point in calling this MC’s harem. At all. Hell the girls you’ve locked down in the basement who are part of that “cult” are now officially, since they ARE WILLING TO BE ABSOLUTELY LOYAL, the only actual Harem content… and you’re trying to make something weird about it. Like you think this genre’s a fucking joke! Fuck you very much for ALL of that. I am done. I am out. This is the last comment or critique I will make – you turned Lois into a Barbie doll with no tits; just for drama which went against previous choices I made by the way. You have taken one of the girls out of the game for six months to chase a COCK TEASE, who SHOULD BE IN THE HAREM! You ruined a sweet heart character by making her a fucking porn star who might as well have just been a prostitute for fuck sakes (Gang bang is NOT usually something most women will even consider. They might FANTASIZE about being taken by two guys at once, or even three… but NO ONE WITH A LICK OF SENSE WILL DO IT. Unless they are VERY WELL PAID FIRST. Because they all know there is a social stigma. There is a double standard, and their value as a partner comes directly from how many guys they WON’T let fuck them. Not the other way around) * No guy wants his girl to have a higher body count than he does; and most guys with money WON’T accept that. There really are not enough insults I could spew at you for just how badly you’ve bungled this project man.

End of the day too much of what you’re working on has pissed me right off. So your work here is worthless as a Harem Game. I don’t give a fuck if you ever actually render the girls pregnant. That’s the point I’m at here; and pregnancy is literally one of the only two things in a sex game I do care about. I don’t even care if you made them all swear eternal sexual servitude to MC for the rest of their lives. On pain of death… because I CAN’T TRUST THEM. Not the way you’ve written them. You brought Randy back; and unless that’s a way to get the retarded but insanely hot rendered young woman INTO THE HAREM, then you’re an asshole who’s just looking for a way to kill off the main character. He WAS ALREADY DEALT WITH. Finito. You using him again may as well scream “I have no clue what to do to give MC more problems” and that’s the wrong tact to take with the genre you’re pushing for anyway. Harem DOES NOT NEED DRAMA. Chasing and winning all the girls to keep is more than work enough thank you very god damned much. You didn’t even show the internal ending with the quint with massive tits (who could frankly stand to be about a cup and a half smaller and she’d STILL compete with Kari for size…)

So again. No more posts. No more wasting my time downloading this shit. You had a game with a lot of actual potential, and you kept shooting it in the foot.