The Falling Reloaded [Ch.5] [WhiteBear]

Actually Mr I’m going to advertize the size I probably only wish I had, or want people to think I do, while insulting someone for a fairly valid if less than expressive criticism – Adult in the context of this and many other game sites that host these games IS generally taken to be involving situations that would require a player to BE 18 to view and interact with them. Of which there are legally speaking, very few. So yes. It is a SEX game site. That point is meant to be inferred, by anyone with functional brain cells. Perhaps you only have 7 of them left? Anybody that makes the argument you just did is being nothing but intentionally obtuse. Very likely block headedly so. (By the way, the average dick is 6 inches, where almost all males fall at least close to that. You really want to impress someone playing the “big man,” try adding another inch or three, to the lie)

The story can be immersive to a point; but it is drawn out with topics that are SENSITIVE. There’s a mental health issue that the dev seems more to want to fuck with the player’s mind with. There’s an aspect that SHOULD be Harem straight up; but will probably end up more in the vein of dating sim. There’s the point that the MC is supposed to be some sort of special bloody “chosen one” type or uniquely powerful somehow – and you spent the first like hour of the narrative getting your ass handed to you because the dev can’t seem to decide whether he wants the MC to actually start powerful and gain more, or just be everybody’s bitch. I will say anything FemDom loses massive points for me. Especially since the game seems to want you to chase all the women. Which again, points to a Harem… but it’s NOT well implemented. There were exactly maybe 4-5 times in total I even got to make a choice the last time I played… and most of them are not that brilliantly thought out. The aspect of whether this asshole’s schitzophrenic or not really REALLY does not need to be there. He’s an ANGEL/DEMON/Whatever kitchen sink this Dev is going to throw in to justify power ups. They could literally be manifested spirits of people he cared for, or people he’s killed. Called to serve his will and that would make more sense than (like a human) Hell BROKE his mind. Fuck that. And fuck any dev that thinks putting mental health issues into a FANTASY game is a good idea. We play these bloody things to ESCAPE real life. Not that hard a concept…
The dev started by writing his MAIN Character into a corner; introducing several side characters who are frankly figments of said MC’s mind that were not necessary, to pad the run time. Then ran out of ideas and said fuck it. To let MC start to rule Hell – all while warning us we were still screwed because we might have claimed the throne but that doesn’t mean we’ll keep it. So it left me wondering what the hell the Dev wants from this story in the first place, and where he’s really going to be able to take it, if he’s THAT inclined to tie anvils to the ankles of his characters. There’s the fact again that it seems to want the guy to be a heartless asshole in general; but you can’t be to the girls. Because that will fuck you over mechanically I’d be willing to bet. I’m not even going to count the Mary Sue BS. I just ignored it as something that all the devs these days feel they need to do, because god forbid the MC who is MALE actually seem like he can be competent, and knows better than them what the plan should be to get what HE wants. Regardless of whether it jives with their desires. Also, that kind of thing tends to make Sex the reward for being a good boy. It’s not a fucking Scooby Snak. It CAN be done as a bargaining chip; even if I don’t like the implication, and it would be good for a ruthless ruler of Hell storyline. However that means it should be done no matter whether MC is a “nice guy” or not. Which again, god forbid that happens.

As far as I can see the Dev isn’t that skilled a writer. Or if he does know what he wants to do with the story, he’s not very good at leading the player to be able to figure it out. Or providing good options in player choice that can lead to either a dark run but positive end for the MC and Co, OR an actually GOOD ending overall. Because thus far, MC is screwed. Screwed harder; and Screwed every which way but loose. Then Screwed: The ReeeeVengeance, just for good measure. No matter what path the dev wants to try for.