The Builder [Ep.5 B2] [LewdRobotics]

Walkthrough mod pls

For myself; the NTR tag is not needed. The break up is fine – the pregnancy part is being needlessly vindictive and I’m personally not willing to give it a pass because under VERY specific circumstance it can turn out to be the MC’s baby inside her. Your first GF is a bitch. Plain and simple. The town’s “mystery” is more a hook to get the harem convolution to even happen as allowable. The hippie older “aunt” style character DOES NOT need to already BE pregnant. That is not the more common draw in that fetish. For most, it will actually be either the risk in, or the application of conception. It’s a blood legacy shared point, that makes it so desirable.

The hotel owner being a rabid bitch to MC needs to not. Just come the fuck on… He’s supposed to just barely have gotten there, slept in the INN for 2 seconds and she goes off on him for what wasn’t even really his fuck up. BUT you want most people to think she should be pursued? Really… Tsundere are a hard sell in a lot of cases to anyone with a half brain cell. I do not know why so many people are obssessed with them. They are generally just abusive. They don’t tend to work in a harem unless they soften quickly. You’ve barely introduced any characters at all = you basically do the older/younger thing is blackmail that’s all but flagged to get the MC bitten in the arse (whether I liked that scene or not) and it’s to set up NTR as means for the priest’s wife to let MC breed her. [At least it’s the kind of NTR most would find favorable, but it’s still a screwed up situation in the long run]

The teen who’s tied to the emotionally maladapted elder hippy who is already pregnant, wants to be. Even to the point of by the MC sight just barely seen… but of course you focus more on the Aunt. Cock teasing isn’t going to win you points for paetrons. If it’s a harem; player choice of partners should always be involved. Do note: I care less that the aunt type IS pregnant, than that it’s not done in game by the MC to start with. It does mark her a very hard sell for joining a harem. I also really rather wish you guys writing harems would realize that NO male who can LEAD a harem should ever be as passive as most are written. It’s NOT all about pleasing the women. They should – if he is for whatever reason, so massively desireable to them all – each WANT to please him. First, or foremost. One way, or the other. The enticement cannot be just opening their legs, and MC should be able to refuse joining with any person he does not actively want to pursue. I don’t care how “important to the plot” they might be in the long run. If he’s a passive, please everyone little bitch then most women will only use that… and forget him once they get what they wanted to start. Which would break the harem and kill the fantasy. If all that comes out of their mouths when they’re not actively being pounded by his usual horse cock is insults… that’s not generally attractive to most people. It provides no means to think he should keep any of the women.

I do not trust the mayor’s wife (or mayor I can’t recall) I do not think it’s all that big a mystery and you should NOT write the MC to come off that much a dumb ass that he has to “figure it out.” I’d really rather most of them were like the mechanic chick – who of course he can’t yet do anything with – who straight up asks MC if he wants to breed/fuck her. It’s not about whether he goes crazy. It shouldn’t be able his mental state at all; other than to say he has an open heart and perhaps wider tastes in attractions in general. Wider though, does not mean land whale. Curves are fine for the most part but there’s a fine limit to what’s overall aesthetically pleasing. Thus far, I do not to conclude, trust that the dev intends things to work out well for the MC. There are quite a few pitfalls I can see in general. I’d like to be proven wrong but it’s a big wait and see for now.

disappointing. very short story with nothing really happening

What to expect? An emotionless story and a pushover mc.