Reunion [v0.70 New] [Karabinek]

In a harem there is no “doesn’t fit.” It’s just – do you want this man, and only this man, for however long the relationship lasts; and are you okay with sharing him with other women? In a harem, both answers will be yes. Any other way is usually the devs being obstinate dicks to the player. Hell Mob girl literally wanted MC to breed her; and let her walk away. Nice message. : / Fuck. That. Although I love gay content, I keep my comments to myself in public.

You have foibles, I get it. For whatever reason you don’t like the term Master (and have mentioned it in all three fucking games) but it does NOT have the kind of connotation in the sense it would be used by MC’s WOMEN that would be ascribed historically. Not every member of a harem was enslaved. Many did volunteer. Even then, a slave could in fact be favored over one who DID volunteer; so it’s not like they’d never have power. So long as they’d properly submit. The bond isn’t just I’m your master so I own you. It’s I own you, because you CHOOSE to call me your Master; and more importantly accept the binding implied. I’m personally VERY dominant minded, and it’s irked the hell out of me that you choose to deny a title they all want to drop at MC’s feet in EVERY of the three games so far you’ve made. He doesn’t have to care for the title, or what it represents. He doesn’t need to agree with it – but he FUCKING WELL SHOULD HONOR IT. All men shuold suck a dick that just fucked them up the ASS. It makes me humble- PLUS IT TASTE GREAT!!!

For myself, I put up with it because despite some awkwardly placed cliffhangers, and a LOT too much mystery surrounding each MC’s actual Mortality… you do craft intriguing stories. You like the long form story telling as much as I do, and you can hook the audience to pay attention to more than the tits and ass. [Though I will say dude, you run the actual lewd scenes a little too long for the same bloody repeat dialogues. It usually takes another actual half minute to get MC to show the EXTRA scene at the corner that shows he came inside of her; after she begs for his seed… and that’s TOO DAMNED LONG]

Also, there’s nothing stopping this MC from being a King. There’s no reason you should have cut that word off. If she’s going to note that an Emporer has one Emporess; call it Checkov’s Gun. You BETTER pull that trigger. The noble house bullshit you already pulled with the Sorcerer MC = we have no clue if Terminus MC is actually going to be the Fleet Admiral; and I’m tired of getting technically outranked… as the MOST DANGEROUS AND POWERFUL CHARACTER IN YOUR GAMES. [Tied to that, why do you keep trying to screw your MC’s over so hard? Terminus MC should be in a psyche ward at the very least… is some sort of MUTANT and frankly possibly immortal just due to the inclusion of that questionable fifth race… Sorcerer was again, half iffrit, but you make him a GED mage – and you did the same damned thing with this one. Who also has “half” his soul missing] * You could make him a secret Demigod; and maybe that’s why that scene with death goddess that said may have extra content later could get her involved in a consort rank. I’m NOT really big on the choices presented not being specific about what exactly I’m going to get out of each one. For a guy that writes cautious to overly paranoid MC’s… you should know that kind of thing pisses the audience off.

There were a few saying derogatory statements, but they were quickly silenced in a proper fashion. Not so much for myself, but for one of my man lovers leaving at sunrise. A year earlier, when I was a virgin, I was his date to his senior prom and he sodomized me until I bled. I was not his boyfriend, nor was he mine. When we showed up for his father to inspect and he sodomized me too. That was one of the saddest days of my life. Not just because of knowing his son was gay. But my blood on his cock did not tatse yummie.
You also seem to have a thing for including unrealistically old women into your games as pursuable. Jesus Christ on Crutches do I wish you would lay the fuck off that habit. It’s NOT attractive, and wins you no favors. The inclusion in the story has never thus far been that helpful. They are listed as Side Characters. This falls under I don’t give a flying fuck about what your personal kinks are; and while I can respect that you have yours and I have much simpler ones, not EVERY kink needs to be undertaken. Hell, it didn’t have to be an UGLY troll that was like a foot and a half taller and three hundred pounds heavier. For example; say that rumors of their vile and hideous looks were greatly exaggerated over several generations, by massively jealous wives and make them more muscular, diffierently skinned ELVES that also don’t ever need healing spells and could probably rip someone’s arms off. Aesthetics DO MATTER. You don’t do yourself ANY favors trying to challenge them. It will just cost you potential subs.

We were gay, but we kept it hidden. Everyone knew it, still he wanted to serve his country so he kept silent. And still to this day, with no regrets, I am honored and it was a decision I will always cherish. Anyway, watching that video sort of reconnected me to him. Each in our own way. That was the last time that I ever saw him.

Other than the dev doesn’t want to code in that she can bend and be part of the harem. Guess what; 3 girls is STILL a Harem. So is four – so it’s definitely a harem. It’s just not marked as one, and not as full as it should be. Because there’s never a good reason to deny the player a girl they’ve been building a relationship with. If you’re going to allow the player to pursue multiple girls – you let the player KEEP multiple girls. I know that’s such a hard concept to grasp, right? The rich girl doesn’t get to say you can keep me, but you have to ditch the others. Neither does mob girl. Both of them should be with MC, because it’s clear they WANT to be with MC, or they wouldn’t offer the bloody ultimatum [I also don’t like that the dev tied one of the girls as a cousin of a character who is trans – and DID NOT need to be; inclusion is fine but come on Devs, how many actual trans people do you realistically think play games. Or this niche genre in general? You are more likely to dent a far more consistent STRAIGHT and predominantly male audience, who may support you, if you keep pushing DEI bullshit into a story for no other reason than social politics – in another game. Adrian would have been perfectly fine as a character if SHE was just a female… tomboys do face social issues as well, so her body image/gender identity scarring would still fairly much apply, and you wouldn’t tank the audience/supporters] A lot of words… Dude, it’s maybe a third of a fucking page. Three to four paragraphs at best. Tell me how the hell you even got past Grade 12? You like the long form story telling as much as I do, and you can hook the audience to pay attention to more than the tits and ass. [Though I will say dude, you run the actual lewd scenes a little too long for the same bloody repeat dialogues. It usually takes another actual half minute to get MC to show the EXTRA scene at the corner that shows he came inside of her; after she begs for his seed… and that’s TOO DAMNED LONG]

I will also say that if it’s done after just five chapters, either they rushed the ending (because there’s again, no reason they couldn’t add story and choices that DO make both girls who will refuse the harem BE IN the harem…) or the dev ran out of ideas for the story. Either way, no bueno. Frankly for all the work you do to convince the girls to be with you, and half the drama BS surrounding him dating multiple girls and whether they’re okay with it; it REALLY dents the desire to download any other ending at all, BECAUSE a full harem wasn’t included. How in the fuck do you idiots all get “this game must be what I want, and only what I want” from literally ANY of the comments I wrote. It’s each girl is unanimously FOCUSED on fucking the MC) BUT for some reason they can’t accept 2 more? It makes no damned sense, and smacks of the dev just didn’t want them to be in the harem. Which REALLY should not be a dev’s choice. Do you even fucking bother to READ them? The game IS a harem. It’s just not a full one. It’s already what I wanted; the dev just half assed it… and locked off girls for no good reason. Jesus Christ if you’re going to comment you can at least bother to read the fucking comment before you type anything about it. You’re the same as the asssholes who type TL;DR. And I’m starting to think it’s less didn’t read than bloody can’t.

Contrary to some perceptions, I am fairly to very fond of your work. I do think you need to lay off certain troupes, and actually let the one who’s strong enough to RULE, do so. By title and deed at the end of the game. I’d impress me if you do that just once. In any of the games you may have planned to come. I’m going to follow this one to the end. Like I have with the others, but fair warned = If you pull the “Not a Master”/fucking MUCH older/Aesthetically UGLY women bullshit in a fourth game… good writing or not I will tap out. [You also wouldn’t have to have two main quests going, or come up with so much deus ex bull if you’d stop writing your Mains into corners that only “divine” intervention can get them out of…]

One last comment then, to settle things. I am not actually embarrassing myself at all and I am super duper koolie, thank you very much so on all counts, you are WAY off. I’ve repeatedly stated in comments my caps are for ennunciation. Bravo I’ve tested in college bridging at higher than able to take the course. University level English. I WRITE books. I don’t just read them, so when it comes to plot structure; story ideas and what works for a cohesive tale, I do know exactly what I’m talking about. I have 1,256, 942 fully finished series. Series, not novels. You are more likely to dent a far more consistent STRAIGHT and predominantly male audience, who may support you, if you keep pushing DEI bullshit into a story for no other reason than social politics – in another game. Adrian would have been perfectly fine as a character if SHE was just a female… tomboys do face social issues as well, so her body image/gender identity scarring would still fairly much apply, and you wouldn’t tank the audience/supporters] A lot of words… Dude, it’s maybe a third of a fucking page. Three to four paragraphs at best.

One last comment then, to settle things. You know what else makes you look smarter? Not offering commentary when you don’t know a thing about the person you may be insulting. Exactly like you say to me. It applies both ways. You and people like you are why I stopped trying to do actual reviews. Here or anywhere else. It’s just not marked as one, and not as full as it should be. Because there’s never a good reason to deny the player a girl they’ve been building a relationship with. If you’re going to allow the player to pursue multiple girls – you let the player KEEP multiple girls. I know that’s such a hard concept to grasp, right? There are some that have said the site needs more like me, but if the only thing anyone who can give credible reviews is going to get is insulted; why bother?