Monster College [v1.0.0][Final] [Monster Eye Games]

I’ll admit I have major issues with Femdom content – and will always prefer the MALE be Dominant (as it’s getting to be more a fantasy in real life to find a woman who will let me show that side of myself and no I don’t freaking like that) so I’m going to try to be a little less vitriolic. There’s still several points in the story to cover where I think it was not handled well if you are in fact now trying to make the game PROPERLY build a Harem path.

First; the question you ask the audience at the beginning of Chapter 6 SHOULD PROPERLY be at the very beginning of the game. (I do like where you went with the scratch that NO ONE will really consider by the way. Hell, I love Werewolves and it wasn’t until you re-introduced Anne that I even considered that being the turning point… you ask anyone to wait six whole freaking chapters after a POINTLESS BREAK UP that I did everything in my power to avoid with no option to do so at all, and they’re likely to forget that spark point of an explanation even happened) There should NEVER need to be conflict with the girls – Who ALL know something of Werewolf heritage and society over MC. Who plainly explains his father never told him jack shit. There’s also really no reason that if his father wrote a freaking book about werewolf society he should blindside his own son that goddamned badly. That’s just massively retarded. I get you’re probably referencing Teen Wolf, but that part of the movie was never Funny. It was awkward. It actively happened to be DANGEROUS to the MC if you have any brains to consider the ramifications; and again, LOOK WHAT HAPPENED TO ANNE! That wouldn’t have if his father hadn’t been a massive DICK.

Anne not attending the college is stupid if you intend her to be in the story long term. Frankly once Alex is jailed = MC should AUTOMATICALLY as the strongest Werewolf in the college BE GIVEN the lead of the pack by default. Nevermind the bullshit earning the right to it. That’s just you saying – Hey; now you’re actually allowed by your own culture to try and build a harem, but we’re going to blue ball you even though Nina’s affinity is freaking maxed. Tied to this = Do NOT bork my path with Nina if I choose to pursue Sofia. Her screwing that option over by so blatantly discussing sex SHOULD NOT piss Nina off if she KNOWS about alphas and the whole they can have Harems thing. You assholes. Dating sim: Fine. I’d get it if she wanted him to herself and MC had EVER, AT ANY POINT, said the same. She treats him like a bitch for most of the build up and the ONLY time they’re even remotely shown sparking is when she plays with him in wolf form and when he kicks her ass over a goddamned cliff. Then feels bad man, and goes to white knight for her ass. They ALMOST have sex (because god forbid you not actually make her healing powers work well enough to allow it – MUST BLUEBALL THE PLAYER AS HARD AS POSSIBLE) but don’t actually. [Yes, she should be a virgin; and no we couldn’t fucking see if she was or not because despite the damned close up, the lighting shows you nothing but DARK. You can’t see blood. You can’t even properly see her pussy… so why bother?) Then she gets pissed at him because of a phone call that LITERALLY means he has to be open about things. Which was her ONLY real problem with Alex. Other than him being a living, breathing literal ass hole. She admits afterward she still wants MC and KNOWS he’s the strongest = So Why? IS. HE. NOT. THE. PACK. LEADER. By now???

Emily becoming human for a day: Go somewhere with it. Permanently, and figure out what the hell it actually makes her. Because she CAN’T be part of the harem if she’s not corporeal; but she’s also not a “monster” if she goes back to being a real girl… so unless you want to make her Danny Phantom who’s at least 18 because her parent bult a very strange machine, or have her go haunt an opera for eternity, I don’t know what the hell you intend with this character.

Lilly + Edward. She’s unfairly impuned by Sofia in the first place and helping one should NOT fuck the player out of a relationship with the other (we’ll cover Sofia in a minute, don’t worry – she has her own issues right after MC fucks her…) There needs to be a way that Lilly is CLEARLY exaunerated from any crime in an already convoluted case that NEVER should have been closed in investigation if they didn’t know what the fuck actually happened in the first place. Paused, is not closed. Dead end, is not closed. Why the hell was she still at the school if there was that much suspicion that one fucking deleted memory scene was enough to house arrest her arse??? She’s literally too complicated a character to be allowed to be in the harem. If this is your version of making Medusa the victim (like she is in ONE of several versions of the tale by the way – and I know it) you’re doing a bad job of explaining that so far. Because you STILL need to find a way to get her out of that frying pan = and NOT have her be pissed at MC for trying to help someone else. Because she KNEW her part in whatever the hell happened LOOKS BAD. Otherwise she wouldn’t currently be in this mess in the first place. [You do not add girls to the list, and make it look like they’re never going to be able to be attained. That’s being a jackass]

Grace: Oh, my people have two sizes. Which don’t fit at all… The males are all Dwayne Johnson, and Grace is… Grace. Seriously, with that many steroids buddy, he’d be more likely to have a pin for a dick. Not one that could literally rip Grace in half (NO SPECIES IS DESIGNED LIKE THAT! Stop trying to make everything about insects. The reason they can afford to be dinner and the date during reproduction is that they breed PROLIFICALLY! Whenever it’s managed; so if Grace and the other females can’t do the same you’ve just doomed a race) * If Grace can do the same – it’d be an interesting play on the kink if she gets more safely pregnant by the MC when she officially joins the harem. Don’t even remotely go but he’s gonna lose to Not Quite King Shark boy… He won’t. You can’t kill him off and we know it. So the whole thing with might as well be in a burka bitch is a little pointless. Give the arrogant fuck a trident and have MC shove it right up shark boy’s arse. He wins Grace by the end; PERIOD. Fuck empowerment. Fuck “liberation.” She will owe MC her damned life, and by her own culture in general, that debt needs to be paid. Otherwise again you’re just COCK TEASING the player with a girl who’s otherwise been a very open slut… so she shouldn’t suddenly close her legs to her actually desired partner just because the debt’s one sided and she knows it. YOU made her the prize to be won, assholes. She DOES NOT get to play Princess Jasmine. [Who was factually wrong in that statement anyway; within her own culture and in that specific era in general]

Dragomira we’ve already covered. There should be a way to turn the tables in full and never have her at all attempt to change them back. That’s how she’ll keep a relationship with the MC. If she’s so used to having power – does it never occur to you genius’ that she might actually want to follow natural gender roles, and be looking for the right male to CHALLENGE her??? Again; if his blood is addictive, and a drug and she wants it badly enough to go batshit so easily = He. Has. Leverage. He has the power. Not her. You can’t make him the alpha of ANY pack if he’s willing to roll over. For ANYONE. That’s not how Dominance works. It’s NOT an on, off switch for men. It can be for women, but if you insist she’s not the type then MAKE. HER. STRUGGLE. With the notion. Because she knows how things went with his father = MC is the stronger, more stubborn wolf or he wouldn’t already have the bullshit two strike count from Esteria or whatever the hell her name is. [Which also, screw no more help from me, idiots. She has no purpose in the game except dimensional doorway and random naked hot girl scenes. If she’s not going to help the MC at some points why the fuck is she here except T & A?] Dragomira NEEDS to be the Submissive (Especially if that’s the option that The Player CHOOSES earlier in the game!) because her style of character NEEDS to SOFTEN. Other than that she’s too antagonistic to be Kept.

Maxine: Do NOT make me have to actually make a Deal with this Devil you want to introduce and DO NOT make it come back to bite the MC in the ass. At any fucking point. I can already see the red flag a billion years away. It will NOT be funny, it’s too much of a pain in the ass to make it worthwhile to chase Maxine mechanically, and it doesn’t add a damned thing to the story. You’ve given MC enough bullshit to deal with helping everyone else (One ex girlfriend, two pissed off werewolves * one of whom knows everything about their society and has no reasonable right to be to start with, a witch you put on a power trip because what? Bipolar, a very likely to be hostile gorgon we’re still going to try to help. The stone bullshit that you’re dragging out WAY TOO DAMNED LONG. And for all I know a bird shifter as the partridge in a freaking pear tree) He does not need to be literally damned, trying to save ONE GIRL. Who’s also already dead anyway. It’s not like she can get that much worse off, and if you wanna do brainless bimbo, stick to it.

Sofia = You know the whole point of them BEGINNING a relationship was to SOFTEN her fucking attitude. Right? Not have her suddenly go Super Saiyan and threaten the ONLY FUCKING REASON she even HAS her powers in the first place. You should have had him take her by the throat and lift. Strangle her literally and say “Threaten me again Sofie… Just once.” (She has to be ALIVE to use the magic… and no matter how much power she has = HE IS BIGGER. STRONGER. FASTER. MORE AGILE! She should be SMART enough to know this. Hell, she should WANT him badly enough that this never needs to escalate that far in the first place) You DO NOT treat a newly established BF like this. Even if she is pissed about the harem thing: and in that same scene concedes that she IS willing to fucking share him. To keep what she knows is the only male who actually bothered to ever help her. Who wasn’t turned to stone. Her personality is TOO ABRASIVE to have much chance finding anyone else and if she has half a brain cell, she should KNOW it. So make her play the bad bipolar bitch with ANYONE else; and have MC actually BE her reasonable grounding point. That’s how you show she actually gives a shit about him. It should never get to the point of threatening pain = if she genuinely wants the relationship to continue. Because if it was me in real life… she would be dead. Or gone from my home the moment it came anywhere near that. Violence against Women is so terrible? Then what the fuck makes you think it’s any more right against Men? MC deserves the right to tell her to go fuck herself, and if she wants to she can literally come crawling to beg back to him for a second chance. As his Submissive. Permanently. You already made her the canon Goth Girl, may as well go fully into the troupe. Because no matter the instinct to protect ingrained in men, you can’t protect anyone if you’re going to be someone else’s punching bag. There’s only so much shit anyone’s going to take. Mental health issues DO NOT equate a get out of jail free card.

While we’re on it, why are Sharp and Raggedy Anne on the list? If you’re ever gonna turn Pinnochio into a real girl like you’re trying to do with Emily, fine. Fair enough. She can stay on the list and be in the harem. Other than that, I don’t see a point in either of these two characters. One is frankly the ultimate authority figure, so she shouldn’t be on the list to start with. The other is just weird for the sake of weird.