Heir Apparent [v.0.02] [SilkandMilkProductions]

First, Incest isn’t as taboo as it used to be – but it is getting REALLY overdone. Second, if he’s the Heir Apparent and reigning prince of any given country no matter how small; he would have a HELL of a lot more women to choose from than blood family. The premise is already massively stretched by just that point. If you want to argue the family has the traditional value of “keeping the bloodline strong” held over from ancient times, fine. Flawed, but fine. The bigger problem there is literally none of the characters are likeable, and you’ve turned the MC into the biggest wuss, who’s supposed to be Dom somehow, to lead a harem or even get a woman in his family to pay him any attention at all. If he can’t stand up and defend himself against his own family – how in the absolute fuck do you think he’s going to lead a country??? That’s just from a point of the storyline. Which barely exists because you’d rather keep everything “mysterious” (That can be a credit, IF you’ve actually worked out the lore beforehand that you want to show and are drip feeding it to the audience. I don’t think that’s the case here) The art is okay. I personally find the aunt and mom a little too thick. They did not need to be lesbians AT ALL, and it’s unclear if the Aunt actually cares for her husband – I believe she’s told MC in the last update that the man she married was known to her, to be gay, which is a BS excuse to try and allay any fears about NTR, most people who are sane do NOT marry their best friend who is ONLY a friend – There’s also the point neither is really young enough to breed anymore, or it would be absolutely their last go at it, so they should also be the FASTEST gained if you want to go with Harem. One sister is bipolar one way, as the innocent who loves you, but doesn’t want to really do anything sexual… and the other is all sex, all the time, but with her legs fused crossed because even though she DOES want MC and DOES love him; she’s absolutely Tsundere. Which is never not a bad call.

To be clear, I do not care that there would be lesbians in the game. I do care when every single time someone puts a “harem” tag, there always seems to have to be lesbians involved. Why? They’d have no interest in a male Lead. They’re not lesbians if you can “turn” them, they’re bi at best, and teases at worst. Lesbian isn’t a scale style of thing. You either are one, or you aren’t. Bi is the one that has the point of just being Bisexual straight up, or with the precursor “curious” where you haven’t decided if you might be, or not. The Aunt and Mom are better focused on the MC as a buffer for the PITA to the player, that the cousins’ personalities are. There’s a balance, and your game does not yet have that. Also if you’re going to straight up throw out you’ll quit without enough support; I doubt it ever will. Most people that play these games do not mind supporting when the work is even just good, and is consistent. There is a trust in consumerism that has to be built first. However, your tactic is a sledgehammer. It won’t win you any friends, or more paetrons at this rate. No one wants to think they’re tossing money down a well. Which is what you’ve literally just told your audience they will be doing if they support you, and you don’t hit whatever bar it is you imagine will be enough. Now I know only not to be hopeful for any further updates, if money is your only motivating work ethic. That point will sour to dwindle further, an already decidedly niche fanbase.