Become a Rock Star [v1.01][Final] [Mr Jet]

Hey Guys
I am new and searching for some bad games dominant type with multiple endings.
Or threesomes include men bisexual. Please suggest some

DON’T BE FOOLED:

The artwork may look like BAD quality, but the writing is straight puked up garbage, and dev has no sense of proper chronological timing.
This is either just a literal Google Translate, or even worse, someone who actually thinks they’re good at english and wouldn’t change it if you told them to.

EVEN WORSE THAN EVEN WORSE: on numerous occasions the word ‘cool’ is used instead of nice, even during X scenes.
And even if it wasn’t so, or ‘just’ because of bad english/translation, the dialogue itself
is just horrible in general, both especially notable during X scenes.

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Dev has no idea how the real world works, and clearly neither does anyone who thinks this game
is actually A level.

Multiple instances where MC says something, girl repeats what MC said,
and MC instantly cuts her off like a fucking asshole and either literally
commands her to stop (despite him being the initiator and next to that, not her fucking owner),
or says something else completely nonsensical.

Got news for ya buddy, you got a long life of being single ahead of you if you think that’s how you interact with women
or even people in general. It’s gonna be either that or jail.

This is just my opinion as a player and it’s worth is what it is, this game as a lot of good thins, good characters
and for the most part a good and fluid storyline.
But it also has some things that aren’t right, first there are some errors like:
– sex scene with Selina in her bathroom were her lingere changes from blue to red multilpe times,
– foreplay scene in the garden at Julias party, strange height of selina legs,
– and some strange body positions and strange body movements in some sex scenes,

There are some things that don’t match the characters in terms of dialogue and actions, like you just say “I love you”
to a girl and in 5 seconds, your mouth fuck her, deepthroat till gaggin, and the vulgar way mc speaks to his “oficial girlfriends” not like a man but a jerk/rapist, also in the Lisa/Jade path the threeway relation should be more smooth, because some times it looks like theres a more love relation between Lisa and Jade and just a sex relation between mc and the girls, not an equal relation between the three.

In terms of the story, there are some errors:

– first the Lisa/Jade relation is known in one of the rehearsals and again in the rootop scene at Julia party, this is easy to fix, just change the dialogue in the rooftop scene to something like Jacob asks how there relation is doing,

– also the mc’s mother, when his father is at the hospital, Julia says their father is sick for about six months and that the ones who knew about his hilness were, her, Marcus and the mother but in the bedroom scene between mc, Lisa and Jade, the mc says his mother is gone for two years

there are also some aparently abandom paths, again in the bedroom scene when Jade and Lisa saw the fotograph of mc and his mother, it looks like there could be some secret there who could have open a path for a non incest relation between mc and Julia and even maybe between mc and Rachel, could be fun and let’s face it Julia is an amazing charater, the same can be told about Nicole or Erica from NakedPark band.

The endings are okay, but are a little void, for instant the Lisa ending, they just go for dinner, theres not something that says closer, like a wedding, is like an open ending.

In terms of final avaliation i won’t give it a number i will say this:

– Good charaters, good base story, the development has its ups and downs, for the most part is good but should have been better in others
– As a bit of a shock between being an amazing erotic vn and a bad 3rd level porn in some parts
– Still has a lot of meat in the bone, meaning that it could continue to be develop, there is still material and story

In the end is a good vn game