DropOut Saga [v0.10.1b] [LazyBloodlines]

To the dev; not necessarily a bad update, and I appreciate that you’ve finally added a comprehensive bio that shows our progress on either path – but it also should’ve been in the game from the start… – There were way too many instances of dialogue framed in a way that you SHOULD have offered the player a choice of love or corruption points. You didn’t take really any of them. Asuna is still stuck at no love points for fuck sakes – and NOT definitively, that much of a friend. She’s not even insinuated remotely that she might want more, and you NEED to stop making her try to prove how clever she is by playing head games. That’s going to cost her with most players. It doesn’t make her “intriguing” it makes her UNTRUSTWORTHY. Several of the girls are stuck at one. The GIRLS. Not the women; but how the fuck does Sophia have so many damned love points, if Ava is stuck at 3 shown hearts, and none of the other women even have two yet??? I get that those two are your mains, but damn it dude = this is a HAREM. Which means ALL of the girls should be getting at some point VERY soon to the idea of romantic Parity. IF he actually cares about any of the students as a LOVE INTEREST; then you NEED to fuck right off with the stoic AF bullshit. The scene with Jazmin was absolutely retarded, and WOULDN’T need to be wasting so much time in the update’s renders if you’d just let the PLAYER CHOOSE to OPEN UP and BUILD THE FUCKING RELATIONSHIPS!!! What, are you intending to blue ball hot scenes with each girl for the rest of eternity here? The story is bare bones, and you have SHIT for pacing. Otherwise he wouldn’t be dealing with cops dogging him this early, or have been SHOT by one so soon. One of the fucking girls on your list is bloody DEAD… so I have no goddamned clue why she was even on the list in the first place. You can do call back scenes all you want to flesh out the back story dude, but if she’s not pursuable because she’s six feet under rather than six feet tall, DO NOT put her in the fucking list. It’s not that hard a concept. I will give you SOME points for the Julie crushing bit. But goddamn it, just because you’re futzing around with an almost RPG like (Not Quite) harem game does not mean you EVER have to include a D&D game. [Also fuck you for thinking that many girls would EVER be interested in playing the game. By themselves… You want to sell me a unicorn too?] Way, way too many of you devs break your own plot’s narrative by trying to interject something that’s heavily NICHE in real life into the story. MC would have FUCK AND ALL interest in playing the game. You want them to gossip about how far they’ve gotten with him, I believe it. You want them to talk about classes and how boring they are; clothes, movies, make up or fucking puppies, or cat videos… I’d believe any of that. But D&D is predominantly a MALE hobby. Girls that genuinely are interested in playing it, would be like you wrote. One in about ten to a thousand. Julie is fine to be invested in the game, even obsessed with fantasy and RPG’s. I’m NOT saying they don’t exist. But it’s a lot more likely she’d be very frustrated trying to convince her less geeky friends to give the game a shot, than it would for them to be grudgingly – or in ashley’s case not so much – playing it. I didn’t dislike the scene or the art work, and I do think it’s interesting to make the MC a God (in the vein of she’s definitely projecting her crush) in the game… or at this point, in the actual freaking story if you keep mistaking him for Swiss Cheese… but it also was jarring, and unnecessary. This is one place where you SHOULD have earned a LOT of points with EVERY participating girl, based on what you let the PLAYER choose to respond, for his part in the RPG’s narrative. Instead the best you gave was five love points to Julie. : / I’d also really, really appreciate it if you’d absolutely fuck off with the split personality bullshit, and the main girls’ mood swings being so damned violent. It’s called tonal dissonance. If you want to build up that these three care so much about each other, she doesn’t get to go off like a time bomb every time he asserts something. She’s SUPPOSED to be USED to this bullshit mob lifestyle you’ve crafted for your freaking plot, so one of these things is true, and the other does not track. Also, stop trying to prove you can look up medical terms on Wikipedia for fuck sakes man. I guarantee you 99.9% of your given audience do not give a flying rat’s ass about what is affecting MC medically, or how to fix it. You have one plastic surgeon and one combat medic; whoopie. That means they can fix him up – SORT OF. Gunshot wounds are WAY TOO CLOSE to just “patch up.” If you’re going for any sort of realism. It takes exactly ONE bullet in the wrong area, no matter how big you are, and you’re gone. Think about that the next time you decide to pull a scene as stupid as jumped up lazy assed cop comes by to shoot the MAIN FUCKING CHARACTER OF YOUR GAME! Without whom you DO NOT have a story…