Bare Witness [Ch.5][Final] [AlterWorlds]

I couldn’t do it. I could never share Athena with anyone, nor could I ever cheat on her. Athena for me is my #1 AVN girl ever. The solo ending with her really cemented that.

You can ask them not to engage; it’s their choice. I’ve tried to tell the trolls on my comments exactly where they can go – and mostly tapped out when they started stealing the name No (which is my personal in joke)

I don’t start the fights in comments. I did respond to them, and am usually the one with the last word. Mostly because a lot of the trolls don’t bother typing more than maybe four sentences. Go figure. I’ve now decided I’m not going to engage any further comments on my posts, because there’s no point really. They’ll say what they want to say. That’s the end of it.

as to this game, I do not agree with all of your choices but overall, the game was not terrible. It wasn’t as good as it could be; it’s NOT a true harem and it should be. It is harem lite, But it’s not terrible. At this point, I doubt any game could truly surprise me. But if you actually post it; it has the two tags I look for, and ACTUALLY upholds them by the endgame, I’d try it. Adrian really wasn’t your character, and while I appreciate you probably trying to support another’s work, I do not think that character needed to be included even in reference in this one. You can save the advertisements for the credits scene and those that support you genuinely, will probably receive it far better. Those that don’t, won’t have to be taken out of immersion if they have played that mentioned game and recognize the character who was only really mentioned once as far as I’ve played… and I would have played to the end if you hadn’t first tried to make the rich girl keep MC to herself, or made the mafia tied female offer to let MC breed her, but break the relationship and steal HIS kid afterward… it’s STILL his kid. That’s just stupid mate.

You pull any of that in Heaven’s Door and I wouldn’t bother downloading any new games you make. For any reason. I’m willing to give you another shot, because with what the name implies it could be supernaturally focused, which is a major interest for me, and thus actually end up as a true harem. Who knows. So if I see it uploaded here, I’ll give it about three shots to get good, or to know I don’t like it. Other than that I’d make no promises, but I will say you’re not going to get any more supporters trying to tell gamers here that do comment what they can and can’t do. If they won’t listen to the people they are actively attacking when they’re told to stop, they’re not any more likely to listen to you just because you develop a game. It’d be a better comment section in spades if people would just focus on honest reviews, critiques, and commentary about the games. But that’s not how people have generally used this space as given. I do appreciate the effort you put in, but I was overall very disappointed with the lack of a true harem ending.

In a harem there is no “doesn’t fit.” It’s just – do you want this man, and only this man, for however long the relationship lasts; and are you okay with sharing him with other women? In a harem, both answers will be yes. Any other way is usually the devs being obstinate dicks to the player. Hell Mob girl literally wanted MC to breed her; and let her walk away. Nice message. : / Fuck. That.

Other than the dev doesn’t want to code in that she can bend and be part of the harem. Guess what; 3 girls is STILL a Harem. So is four – so it’s definitely a harem. It’s just not marked as one, and not as full as it should be. Because there’s never a good reason to deny the player a girl they’ve been building a relationship with. If you’re going to allow the player to pursue multiple girls – you let the player KEEP multiple girls. I know that’s such a hard concept to grasp, right? The rich girl doesn’t get to say you can keep me, but you have to ditch the others. Neither does mob girl. Both of them should be with MC, because it’s clear they WANT to be with MC, or they wouldn’t offer the bloody ultimatum [I also don’t like that the dev tied one of the girls as a cousin of a character who is trans – and DID NOT need to be; inclusion is fine but come on Devs, how many actual trans people do you realistically think play games. Or this niche genre in general? You are more likely to dent a far more consistent STRAIGHT and predominantly male audience, who may support you, if you keep pushing DEI bullshit into a story for no other reason than social politics – in another game. Adrian would have been perfectly fine as a character if SHE was just a female… tomboys do face social issues as well, so her body image/gender identity scarring would still fairly much apply, and you wouldn’t tank the audience/supporters] A lot of words… Dude, it’s maybe a third of a fucking page. Three to four paragraphs at best. Tell me how the hell you even got past Grade 12? You like the long form story telling as much as I do, and you can hook the audience to pay attention to more than the tits and ass. [Though I will say dude, you run the actual lewd scenes a little too long for the same bloody repeat dialogues. It usually takes another actual half minute to get MC to show the EXTRA scene at the corner that shows he came inside of her; after she begs for his seed… and that’s TOO DAMNED LONG]

I will also say that if it’s done after just five chapters, either they rushed the ending (because there’s again, no reason they couldn’t add story and choices that DO make both girls who will refuse the harem BE IN the harem…) or the dev ran out of ideas for the story. Either way, no bueno. Frankly for all the work you do to convince the girls to be with you, and half the drama BS surrounding him dating multiple girls and whether they’re okay with it; it REALLY dents the desire to download any other ending at all, BECAUSE a full harem wasn’t included. How in the fuck do you idiots all get “this game must be what I want, and only what I want” from literally ANY of the comments I wrote. It’s each girl is unanimously FOCUSED on fucking the MC) BUT for some reason they can’t accept 2 more? It makes no damned sense, and smacks of the dev just didn’t want them to be in the harem. Which REALLY should not be a dev’s choice. Do you even fucking bother to READ them? The game IS a harem. It’s just not a full one. It’s already what I wanted; the dev just half assed it… and locked off girls for no good reason. Jesus Christ if you’re going to comment you can at least bother to read the fucking comment before you type anything about it. You’re the same as the asssholes who type TL;DR. And I’m starting to think it’s less didn’t read than bloody can’t.

You also seem to have a thing for including unrealistically old women into your games as pursuable. Jesus Christ on Crutches do I wish you would lay the fuck off that habit. It’s NOT attractive, and wins you no favors. The inclusion in the story has never thus far been that helpful. They are listed as Side Characters. This falls under I don’t give a flying fuck about what your personal kinks are; and while I can respect that you have yours and I have much simpler ones, not EVERY kink needs to be undertaken. Hell, it didn’t have to be an UGLY troll that was like a foot and a half taller and three hundred pounds heavier. For example; say that rumors of their vile and hideous looks were greatly exaggerated over several generations, by massively jealous wives and make them more muscular, diffierently skinned ELVES that also don’t ever need healing spells and could probably rip someone’s arms off. Aesthetics DO MATTER. You don’t do yourself ANY favors trying to challenge them. It will just cost you potential subs.