From the Eclipse [v0.3.5] [Erochaser]

First – in this current update of 3.5: You wiped the saves; it’s already chapter 2 of the story – you’re expecting people who’ve played this long to recall a damned thing and start all over again from the beginning of even chapter 2. You NEED to fix it so that saves are not broken. Ever. Or stop mucking around with internal systems that WILL break the saves. You will lose supporters for this kind of thing.

Next: I am getting a little tired of attractively rendered women like Azora and now Esmerelda (not to mention the demon queen… who’s name I don’t recall off-hand) being introduced but already TAKEN = Kill off Onyx – FUCK THE MAGICAL SEAL ON PREGNANCIES!!! (You’re messing with a known kink that’s already been set up – though it also irks me that ONLY Bonnie has actually gotten pregnant thus far… – when you do that) You’re gearing up to a WAR across continents with this bullshit shadow council thing; KILL OFF ONYX AND DAEMON = MC can mate/marry or claim Esmeralda and family, AND the demon family to boot. Azora should also be in the harem by this point. Why set her on the side lines, if she’s even remotely attached to MC? There’s the magic girl daughter who’s a sister to Kylie; there’s the priggish bitch who’s going to end up in the same vein as Talia… There’s even the orcs. [Why is that big tit tavern girl even in the game if she a) already has a kid, and b) was going to be yeeted off to gods knows where] There’s the MC’s major Domo’s fiancee… who seemed rather interested in MC. Or was it his sister? I think it might’ve been both, frankly. Which could get both interesting, and extremely messy.

While we’re on it: You have so many females in the roster that I’m both impressed and vexed by the shortness of the updates. You give us not very much to go on while focusing on X girl for a given event – but there’s like 50 of them you could choose who are stuck waiting on the sidelines, and more often than not it’s Airi or Kylie, or the MAIN GIRLS. You still have Penny’s sister – the judge demon that we fucked exactly maybe once or twice. The feral cub, and half the amazonian castle. You have the prisoner girl that is a halfling. You have the weird assassin blonde bitch whose name I don’t think you’ve even properly introduced, who may have been the one to off captain I’m going to NTR you all just so the dev can fuck with the audience (Not cool… I get that he’s an antagonist and it’s there to build tension, but you didn’t have to add in the breaking/breeding bullshit. The girls belong to MC. Unquestionably. It’s. A. HAREM. Game) You have any number of other races – and as Lacey mentioned apparently more princess’ to marry in the wings… There’s more than enough. [AFTER you add Esmeralda, her dragon daughters & The three demons at least that I mentioned, including the demon queen] There’s got to be an end point to the roster man. At some point. Unless that stupid secondary “???” (I really fucking hate when you guys do that. It’s not a cliff-hanger, it approaches deus ex machina, and it’s bloody annoying – if you’re going to introduce a new character fine. Do that. If you’re going to re-introduce an existing character as a surprise add to the roster; fine. Do that just FUCK OFF with the JRPG mystery bullshit) ends up being Eros herself [Don’t do that – you will literally be writing yourself into the game at that point, and that’s a sign of bad writing… Though: adding her into the game to have it be a lever event to mark the MC immortal in a vein that can be shared with his consorts, I could accept. There are ways you can do a self-insert that have import to the story, but also don’t take it over, that are acceptable]

There’s NO good reason to have rendered the demon queen, or any of her daughters attractively, if you weren’t going to add them to the harem eventually. Same goes for Esmeralda, and Sapphire’s already down (though someone needs to tell her Mate & Wife mean the same damned thing… just because it’s more primal in mindset doesn’t mean it’s not equal rank) The second demon who’s sister to Penny has already fucked MC to potentially breed. The judge demon’s already fucked MC; the queen’s the only one missing. There’s also the three sisters who are the daughters of the asshole that imprisoned MC to use as a breeding stud for the better part of a year as far as your story’s concerned. Not to mention the WAY TOO MANY side chicks you had MC bang/breed in that castle unwillingly… It’s not like you won’t have a fuck ton of upcoming story content. I am invested. Clearly very. I wouldn’t get so worked up about these games to write as much as I do in reviews of them if I didn’t care. I do not understand how so many commenters can’t see that when they call me negative. But you guys do you.

This is what I’d hope to see – and while I didn’t mean it literally to have every dragon bred and married; I’m not opposed either. If I end up not just the living emporer, but a god because MC marries Eros at the end… Yay. If I only get to be immortal as the living emporer because Eros finally gives in and lets Mags tap that ass… well, one girl given away to get ever-lasting life is also not a bad trade ; ) [Also – and I shouldn’t have to explain this but Christ, don’t take that last part too seriously. It was meant as dark humor to end on a lighter note] Besides, there’s always the reaper goddess. Sue me, I like the big titty goths…

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