How I Became a Hero [Ch.10] [Naughty tales studios]

A magic cat (neko) who teleports between worlds does not fix the issue of the family who doesn’t know MC is not “quite” human. You fuckwits made him vow not to tell anyone, and then you make THE CAT fuck up. If you dare to blame him for it AT ALL I am done with the game and I don’t give a fuck what you do with it. Also DO NOT make the siscon pissed off at MC for any reason now that the cat’s literally out of the bag. She told him she wished he could see her. She does not get to take that back because he actually can [And frankly other than ESG/DEI bullshit there was no real reason to make him blind anyway if you weren’t actually going to go blind swordsman with it]

Saying that time does not pass in one world if it CAN pass in the other is just stupid; because it creates an unncessary problem. If time passes in the elf world – guess who could already be nine months pregnant, or die giving birth before MC even returns. On any given time he goes off to bugger around in the human world. Which apparently isn’t even really his homeworld. There’s also the problem that the “Big Bad” will eventually catch on and fuck around with things. If you can’t even write the fucking CAT to be competent at her job, and help MC KEEP THE FUCKING VOW THAT YOU DIDN’T NEED TO ASSERT HE MAKES IN THE FIRST PLACE, then I DO NOT trust you not to fuck him over that way too. Just DO NOT add any sort of NTR that doesn’t involve the MC helping pointlessly married women to actually get off. It’s a HAREM. There does not need to be any other sort of content.

With several of the females you’ve gone for the giganto tits and ass for now reason where at least two of them are designed to be very muscularly DEFINED. Guess what those types of bodies WOULD NOT have!!! You can’t just pick and choose which muscle groups don’t have way too much fat attached. It DOES NOT work like that. Especially with elves. The introduction of dwarves and goblins and ONE girl who’s basically a giant was ALL of it bullshit. Elves fine. Fair enough; I can deal with that, but in one update the only thing we got to see was the potential for midget porn, and a giant girl who wouldn’t even feel the MC’s supposed Horse Cock. Brilliant! (Yes, this is sarcasm)

We have a married blacksmith whose husband being gay is the only excuse for why she’s on the title card up there above these posts; and willing to do anything with the MC in the first place. We have a new group of elves that are basically werewolves: Who you state bald cannot do anything with men [If you write that they cannot do anything with men OUTSIDE of their own clan = that’s better. It still has the stipulation of rarity and an explanation for the amazon bullshit; but it DOES NOT bork the player from getting involved with any of the women in that context]

We have two girls from the adventurer’s guild – not counting the mage (and fuck you for the sorceress suddenly being “interested” when she’s literally threatened and actively CHOKED the MC with no goddamned answering back, twice now. The only reason she even SHOWS she’s at all interested past the fucking friendzone is a dumb assed flower with a fat assed priestess who ALSO threatened to KILL the MC. FUCK RIGHT OFF WITH THAT = WITHOUT HIM YOU HAVE NO GOD DAMNED GAME YOU INEPT, JACKASS PIECE OF SHIT DEVS. The adventurer with the way too huge ass gives you a blowjob and asserts she wants more – but this is the bitch that threatened to cut MC’s cock off. And of course she has a muscle bound Daddy that’s ten times MC’s size. Just… you really don’t know how to fuck off with threats to the MC, do you? You already killed the string bean blind boy ONCE you dipshits. You do not get a second shot. He’s either going to save both his worlds or you need to write a new story. There IS NO OTHER OPTION! You wrote this bastard as mostly human; so unless you wanna suddenly tell me he’s part werewolf and can regenerate from any wound at any point, he’s not Clark Kent. He’s NOT a whack-a-mole. Stop writing the fucker into corners!!! You’re only making it harder on yourselves to pull out more dues ex machina bullshit to get him out of it.

Also, if you’re going to talk of pregnancy at all – do NOT blue ball the audience. Put it in the damned tags, and by the end, EVERY girl that has anything to do with the MC that the player chooses the green option with had better somehow end up eternally loyal to (if not directly married to) and pregnant by the MC. On ANY world you hyenas decide to send him to.