ONE MORE CHANCE [CH. 3 FINAL] [THE LONELY JOKER]

From what I recall of the two chapters I did bother playing before the third was started: The game is LONG WINDED.

The teacher you get minimal interaction with to influence her INTO the Harem (and the one sex scene I did manage she doesn’t even know it’s the MC and assumes it was her BF… so there’s really NO point in pursuing her if you’re going to make her that fucking stupid) Chapters DO NOT seem to hold much connective tissue. Note again, no actual progress made with the Teacher to get her into the group who WILL routinely WANT to fuck the MC.

That’s on top of some of the choices not making any actual sense. Many of the girls can be NTR, and even the ones that can’t get into Anal or other sexualized content you may not want to push them into. I’m not sure if there will be pregnancy at the end, but one would figure it should for the genre be a foregone conclusion: the original MC before death was stated to have kids I believe, so altering his and the women’s lives “for the better” should only mean he has more of them. So far we haven’t seen any real progress in that regard. However a caveat is I was about 3/4rths done the second chapter before the 3rd was started… so I’m not sure how much progress has been made with what women to this point.

“Final” is to me a red flag. Because it will either be rushed; or continued long after it’s marked as such. Adding little bits on to flesh things out. Which means first it was never actually FINAL, and second, perhaps the dev is just getting bored with the project. Or has made enough money from it, or thinks he’s not going to make more in supporters. Either way, I don’t think the story is ACTUALLY done until EVERY. GIRL. YOU. INTRODUCED. IS. IN. THE. FUCKING. HAREM! Which includes the teacher who should be aware by the second chapter that her Student’s cock is like 3 times her asshole Boyfriend’s and BF can’t give her what she wants sexually… Just saying. She also pisses me off because she’s one of the hottest girls rendered. So making her that level of unattainable was just assholish.

There’s also the fact that you learn to fight; by getting your ass handed to you in the 2 chapters at random points, by two GIRLS. Who aren’t even built that much more buff than MC. Great to know you understand gender dynamics. Skill with the movesets would only get them so far. The MALE has the raw physical advantage. ALL. Of. The. Time! I’m getting really, REALLY tired of harems where the male can’t at least throw a punch to save his life and has to learn from some muscle bound black belted GIRL. Fuck. That. It’s not as sexy as you assholes think, and will actively piss a fair few supporters off in the long run. Stop it. It’s a troupe that needs to fucking die.

The MC is essentially granted a second shot at life and uses what he knew in his first to grant himself Massive Financial advantage – but you still spend the majority of the FIRST chapter building that up, and most of the women don’t trust it anyway. Which makes pursuing them only harder. Most of the women frankly aren’t really worth the effort. Some of them supposedly made choices to be porn stars in the first life; so how valuable is that “Wife” really going to be if you can change her stars – if she’ll even let you. I do forget whether there’s a mob element to this one, as it’s been common in quite a few of them, but if so that’s another point that isn’t in it’s favor. I’ll probably download it soon enough; but it’s a bitch that you have to download ALL three chapters, and then hope to fuck the save files actually acknowledge the fact you have done.

The story would have been better with less females to focus on. With females of actual substance to focus on, and NOT locking the hottest girls to either a dumbassed troupe, or unattainable because NTR fetish (Netori, in the case where you are stealing her from her boyfriend for ONE NIGHT – because again, you only get ONE night!) It will be FINAL when you’ve actually granted relationships fully set to the MC and NO ONE ELSE, with all the women rendered in the freaking title screen. Not before that point. If you have any other games in the works my friend, the best advice I can give you as a dev is FINISH ONE PROJECT first. Then work on any others. That’s the only way you’re going to build consumer trust. Because there are far, FAR too many abandoned projects on Paetron forever and a day, that players like me keep hoping will get finished. Genuinely, to a satisfactory end; finished.