My Ordinary Extraordinary Life [Ch.12] [Cheepshot]

What’s going on with the game. I get to the end of Chapter 10, so the game should move to Chapter 11, yet a page comes up saying “you have completed Chapter 12”, which is the end of the current game. Where’s Chapter 11?

There is a bug in the game. When taking Isis to the store for clothes, it loops infintely as you look at her dresses, meaning you can’t progress!

Frankly, the urination and bestiality were ALMOST tap out points for me; but the ACTUAL tap out of this story (since I tend to focus on HAREM – and specifically harems that allow for pregnancy) was the point where a) Mom gets captured by demons, sent to hell and raped repeatedly by a futa demon. [At least you didn’t make her get pregnant…] B) Big sister (who was a pain in the rear to even get sexual with to start) also gets captured – damn near raped, and then shuts MC down because she “needs time.” Fuck off mate.

First – Harem. = You NEVER let any other “male” fuck the females that are supposed to be claimed by the MC. IE: ANY female your game is forcing us to pursue. Second – There are too many women I wanted to see more of that frankly were pushed to the side; for what reason? Aside from I do not think the dev actually knew what the hell he wanted to do with the story. Or maybe it switched hands, and the other guy wanted NTR over harem but didn’t tell anyone. Don’t know. Don’t care. It COUNTS as NTR if one of the girls is getting FUCKED by anyone other than MC. It BREAKS the Harem, if anyone other than the MC is fucking any of the girls that claim to want him! There was no need to build a relationship in hell (and if you’re going to argue “survival tactic” then MAKE IT CLEAR she’s ACTING – and DOESN’T genuinely feel that way for her captor. Or ANYONE ELSE IN HELL!!!) Jesus that’s not even a thing you should have had to think about. [Yes, it’s realistically a coping mechanism. We don’t come to this site for that level of reality genius]

Frankly Big Sister’s best friend didn’t need to be a side love interest for her – she should JUST have been part of the harem without involving Lesbian bullshit that convolutes the whole core of the genre. I do like her as far as attractiveness, but the Bi shit did NOTHING but piss me off. You end up side-lining her for the majority anyway so the only thing she does is cock-block MC from pursuing Big Sister. Yippee. The whole Red Queen realm thing was like: Why. The. Fuck. Is. This. Even. Here? You spent more time coming up with bullshit game over screens that screw over any illusion of choice, just to send us back there and say our “queen” (who we get no choice about serving by the way – Even though she claims to be MC’s BITCH!) can tell us we dun fucked it all up. *Golf Claps* Brilliant. Dividing the game between realms did it absolutely no favors.

In fact because of most of that, and the ambiguity of the story, and the second realm, I can see why this might be at this point just straight up abandoned. I could write a better story. I have, several times over. The game did have some potential at the beginning, but you screwed that by messing around the interesting characters, and then started breaking the damned harem. Which by the way for a LOT of people is a major draw as a power fantasy. You can’t do that and expect players to still support you. IF the section up to and including the points where Mom was EVER captured to start, and the Sister breaks after her NEAR rape experience (SHE SHOULD CLEAVE TO THE ONE THAT SAVED HER!!!) were ENTIRELY re-written so that BOTH of them were saved before sex happened; then you might have a shot at trying to string together a better story from this crap. As it stands, I doubt you could. I doubt you even remotely care to. Frankly if you wanted to fix it darkly: Have the Mom die bearing out the fully female progeny of the futa – who ends up becoming MC’s very repentant on behalf of his mother, as his willing breeding bitch. Who helps him overthrow the asshole who should never have had a chance to fuck his mother to start with. That way you punish the infidelity; straight up say Mommy was never meant to be in the harem to keep, give her realistic consequences to prolonged fucking without protection – including continued internal ejaculations into her in Hell, and still end up with something that doesn’t overly penalize the player in the longrun. But again, you probably won’t and this game hasn’t been updated in long enough to mark it as abandoned.