Cartel Simulator [v0.5] [ITK]

First – any GIRL kidnapped by a cartel would very, VERY likely have been raped (and or killed, but first raped)

Second: you make it sound like there’s going to be a choice involving Jero’s fate… and there’s not. You decide to kill him. Not break his legs. Not maim him. Not scar his face… not a warning they can all respect that still leaves the fucker alive (removing his balls or his cock by the way – given above, and he likely WOULD have had a go at her) Just nope. Straight up dead for nothing but let’s go out of our way to make the game bullshit from the start. There are other ways. Painful – SURVIVABLE ways, to get the point across. Why bother asking Nadia for advice if MC’s just gonna say fuck it and do what he wants?!?

Third: Sophia isn’t ANY sort of actual leader if she’s going to give “everything” away to get her daughter back. That’s not smart parenting; it actively leaves them WIDE THE FUCK OPEN. There’s no money to get away, and giving up the drug routes as means to make X money was even more stupid writing. You might as well just shoot the fucking player in the head from the start of the game. Come on. Gotta wonder if you want people to just straight up need to choose the Wallet Icon… because that’s fucking retarded.

Four: What the fuck is “Choose Your Best Friend?” I chose the cop before I even knew she was a cop because Mommy has Hentai proportions; one sister looks like a prostitute, the other looks disinterested (and is WAY too insulting to ever be ENDEARING) and Nadia looked interesting, but not I have to pick her kind of interesting. If that’s meant to be your first LI > Say So. There’s also the notion that if you go there; marriage doesn’t block off mistress’ or having many, MANY kids. So it could, and probably should be a harem game. If you’re going to make everything in the “management” sections this level of pain in the rear.

Five: You didn’t need to make the MC short or ugly to start with. That whole section could’ve been safely skipped (though it would be grounds for a character creator – so that’s what I thought it was to start with… and then you pick everything) * Tied: Dude I was born in 1982 with Cerebral Palsy = Trust me, I know exactly what they were capable of sugically – and lengthening the legs by five inches is BULLSHIT. Have you ever had surgery. At all? Nevermind on your legs… Do you have ANY concept of how much that hurts. How much muscle mass you lose, mending – or how goddamned long it would take to get back. No, then there you go. Suspension of disbelief is one thing; being an asshole to the MC and then using Plastic Surgery to cover your ass about having been an asshole, STILL makes you an asshole.

Here’s a tip: When I was about 7 years old I had my first cast. It was plaster of Paris. At that point it was maybe 1989, to 1990. They did not even know back then that when you apply a cast, you lose muscle mass. During the time with my cast on, I had a sore spot on the top of my foot. I complained; mom took me to a doctor. They’d ask me if I could move my toes. Check that they weren’t blue. When I proved I could move them, they said it was fine. This happened SEVERAL times. Until Mom stopped listening, because they told her I was just “attention seeking.” When they cut the cast off me – they went right over the area that had been rubbing (because they DID NOT know about muscle loss when your leg was in a cast and purposely not active) I screeched so loud they heard me in Texas. They actually tried to accuse my Mom of abuse = She told them she took them to SEVERAL doctors. They all said NOTHING was wrong. The fucking cast had been rubbing my skin while I’d lost muscle mass for being inactive… to the point it’d rubbed down to the fucking BONE. Then the genius’ put Iodyne on it… Pretty sure they heard me in Mexico. I am 42 years old, and the scar’s still visible. THAT. Is the extent of their surgical knowledge in 1987. Dumbass’.

Played the game for maybe 20 minutes so far, JUST got to the point Sophia has financially screwed the pooch so hard she never would have at all been made a cartel leader… and so far all you’ve actually done is told me a story. There’s no actual choice involved. No real RPG. There wasn’t even any option to manage your men or finances to get more men, or weapons or vehicles to do better in the first fucking raid… Early Access my ass. You still have a LOT of work to do before this thing is capable of being called a good VN. Nevermind an actual game.

what – only 60 % – this is 96 !!!! great game, great story, great animations – I don’t play crime stuff, but this story and girls and animation is so good, that I couldn’t stop

TLDR : I feel like they wanted to make a legitimate adult-themed-game type shit, but came up real short. The “game” aspect of it just straight sucks. Felt as if I was playing early 2000s flash game. And the “adult” aspect of it very lackluster.

Few things I’ll rant about.

Why did they even give us the choice to select the flag of the cartel if the choices were so horrendously goofy?

The protagonist looks like he suffering from some type of condition both pre and post plastic surgery. Absolute dogshit design.

And he goes through plastic surgery AND leg lengthening surgery just to be more presentable?? Chapo is short and ugly but he still was on top. Drug dealing cartel leader doing all that? Nah, more like male whore selling his asshole.

The combats, mob or individual, sucks.

Leveling up the character, STUPID. I absolutely hated the shooting range.

Sex scenes, very underwhelming.

The whole early game makes it seem like it’s progressing toward step-incest thing, and then only gives you a handful of handjobs and or a blowjob by your “Step mom”. Then throws you some other filter characters. All of which you have to grind to get to.

The story is passable I guess. But wasn’t anything good really.

All in all, I saw some potential. But I have no confidence it will be any better when they finally finish this.