The Hellcat Lounge [v0.3.67] [Wilson Wonka]

For me there are a few questions and a few points to consider:

– First, you mention a harem. More than once; is it teasing or not??? Because if you’re JUST teasing and will make the audience choose between the girls JUST BECAUSE – Fuck right off. Do not even use the term jokingly. There is NO REASON that if you’re going to point out a potential/burgeoning harem the game can’t become one. The MC does not “have to hurt one or all of you at some point.” Jesus. It’s called = they all WANT HIM. They ALL want to KEEP HIM. They ALL agree to MARRY HIM in a hand-fasting, with perhaps one actual legal wife… and BE HAPPY.

Tied point – Why in the holy fuck do all of you devs ALWAYS do ONE fucking girl who literally cannot breed whenever the hell you try for harems??? Is it a joke to you. Do you think that’s a selling point, or is it “diverse?” Because it’s not. It’s literally saying if there IS pregnancy planned or actively in the content = there’s ONE girl you just straight up CAN’T. >.< You always BREAK the power fantasy when you idiots do that. It borks something in the kink, so there's no point in doing it if you're going to do it half fucking way.

– Did there REALLY need to be a girlfriend who cheated on MC just to start with? Come the fuck on; and how in the fuck did you think, let's not even remotely put her in the game, intentionally YEET her from the fucking thing right out of the gate… but offer a choice that ties to LOVE. For what fucking reason? It's clear she's bullshitting and she DID cheat. That she was either doing it all along, or long enough that she genuinely didn't feel guilty enough about the consequences to stop. The only reason for her tears is because she got caught… so why the fuck would you make a choice where the guy rolls over like a bitch and says there might still be a door open. Better question: IS there going to be a door open with her, or is she just straight up gone… and if she is coming back = make her not have seen that ass. Make her not even have had anything to do with sex, up to the point she comes back. Do not mention sex toys, do not try to flirt. Make her fucking GENUINELY contrite and OWN UP to how badly SHE FUCKED UP. (Hell bonus points if you let Seok go off on her CONFIDENTLY at that point – because she's definitely MC's girl now) I'm sick of you asshats that think she can do whatever she wants – any she really – and no matter if she was in the wrong, because she's in the game as a prerequisite love interest we get no fucking choice about in the first place, MC is just supposed to "make nice" and take her back. Especially in a harem. Where the whole point is choosing who gets to be in one, and who is actually VALUABLE. Fuck. Off.

– Why did you make a sex scene that you can ONLY get if you let Seok hate you? You've clearly made her MUCH more integral to the story than the mechanic will ever be. Again; if this is EVER going to be a harem, DO NOT make me choose between the girls (this also applies to the love and hate points, genius' – fuck off with choosing between Cait and Lita, or making Rose & Sloane pissed if I go with the rest of them) * The point being the MC profess' not to want to hurt ANYBODY… and the whole damned point of the "contest" [Other than being halfway to a bullshit excuse to potentially allow a harem that I don't trust you're actually going to do at the end just yet…] was to get TWO of the girls to accept their feelings. Which they're not going to do if I have to choose ONE. : /

– Also: Why the fuck is blonde drunk bitch tied to Lita but NOT Bi? She can be denying that she finds MC attractive, but there's NO REASON to render her as one of the hotter females in the game if you're going to give the player NO ability to pursue her right out of the gate. She DOES NOT need to be in the game at all, and especially not for the way you've written her relationship with Lita. Just to give the idiot the excuse to join in the Harem. (Open relationships USUALLY break in real life; and are at best the last STOP GATE measure to try to salvage what is otherwise unsalvageable – that's the difference between an "open" relationship and a Harem. Harem is NOT open. It's a group of females that agree to share ONE MAN. Who gets to choose whom else joins, with the consent of said females in backing. They DO NOT get to fuck anyone else) * Either make her a love interest as well or write her the fuck out of the game entirely. Those are your two choices. It looks like you're heading one way more than the other; so again – why. Was. She. In. The. Damned. Game? Lesbians are NOT attractive to any straight guy with half a brain cell.

– Cynthia is tied with the last point; and also Mary's Mom. There's NO REASON to make Mary's mom flirt if you weren't going to present her as an eventual option. Cynthia is the sort that NEEDS to be softened, or done away with. I don't give a flying fuck what her "excuse" is for such vitriol. If she's going to be that passive aggressive, she's going to lose both her damned daughters – and you've written her with the kind of career path where she SHOULD be smart enough to KNOW IT. If Cait doesn't face her down and make her reflect on why she "doesn't like = bullshit, projection" the MC then have her brash sister do it. Since she's likely to end up in the harem, if you are going to go there, as well. There's NO REASON to make such an antagonistic female if this IS going to ever be a harem game… where we can't bend her over the kitchen counter and give her what she won't admit she HAS been craving.

– Why the hell are there no actual showings of MC's finish inside of a girl? Are you just going to ignore pregnancy, or will that be included at some point (recalling what I wrote about Lane…) There's also no moaning to be had, so the animations looped or not, don't do much for fapping. Especially since so many here have complained (and to a point they're not wrong) about the tatts.

* Final point: Just because you're in a band doesn't mean every inch of every body in it needs to be covered in Tatts bud. I like them to a point, and as strategic placements they can attract the eye's focus to your most flattering attributes, or more aptly cover flaws… but most people get designs that actually MEAN something to them. So rather than just have them be there, and have your audience complain about them: Share in the story, as a character development point WHY each got the tattoos they have. What they mean to them. Also for fuck sakes, scale it back a bit. One or two on each girl or guy is more than enough. One sleeve, or a matched set at best. One large one on the back or chest or wherever. [Most people will not get one on the face, so I'd fuck right off with that on the MC – unless he was in prison] Don't just do it because you think it looks cool. There's usually a reason they're called armor for the soul.

– There is also the point that if you do the Harem: Yes. It's patently obvious that Mary is gearing to be the main girl. Which means that SHE shouldn't be the ONLY ONE changing someone's "perspective." MC should be able to influence her into the Harem as well; if she's supposed to be the lynchpin that's so heavily painted to the appeal of family life and marriage to one girl. (Every. Girl. You've introduced, or are intending to introduce – including Renata, the mechanic, Sarah and Cynthia alongside Lita's Girlfriend, Simone? and Rose – should all be in the harem as well. Whether or not they get as much screen time as the major LI's) She's clearly got enough of a wild streak thanks to Mommy that she should eventually encourage an admittedly dejected mother who's maybe been putting up a brave front to try to salvage a marriage that might be very slowly crumbling, to go further than just flirting with her "boyfriend." It doesn't have to be just a one-sided exchange for her to hold value in the game.

The tats lounge.