Carnal Contract [v0.9 Rework] [Dotty Diaries]

This rework version is pretty good. Animation, renders are better than its predecessor. I just hope that dev should add incest patch. I will rate this 4/5.

Pretty good, with only a few areas I wished for improvement. It’s rather polished though, with good tunes, animations that just keep getting better, etc. The sandbox aspect is easy enough to deal with so as not to detract, and you can always hover the cursor over the ? icon to be told where to go to advance the story. No leftist junk, for the most part: so no gay/lesbo stuff. There is an obligatory Asian girl and an obligatory black woman, for politically correct purposes–which is alright, since it’s not pushed in your face, you can avoid either. No NTR, no black males. The MC is mostly not a beta-male, and the sex scenes benefit from this–he takes charge and tells them what he wants. Dialog is smooth and good, also.

Decisions have significant impact on storyline (the core-loop score is probably for an earlier version and much too low, now.) Stuff will come back to bite you later, so keep that in mind. There’s accidental peeping and one choice to peep, and those that do it get punished. While the story tends to follow the usual tropes, it does improve upon them. For example: instead of the usual yoga scene, it instead has the brother teaching the sister self-defense and how to get out of or break chokes and holds. And, instead of the usual dressing room scene, in this one you have to find the outfits, and it’s a costume store so you get some nice cosplay and risqué stuff, too.

Women will also probably enjoy this VN, as there’s lots of relationship drama/angst. Also, while it does have the IC tag, the only IC hasn’t happened yet, and it will be w/ relatives related in only by law. It’s a mild kink type of VN, for the most part–so far, but not boring. We get little bits of some spicier stuff, which is nice–sort of satisfying both crowds. Content also seems avoidable.

Warning, this v0.9 has a bunch of missing image files (one even for the loading screen.) If it’s a renpy error window, you can read the character text to see what they are saying during the missing image, so you can keep up w/ the storyline, and then hit ‘ignore’ option. If the error is the other kind where the missing file is in red text at the top left, then you have to just wait about 8 seconds (sometimes hitting ‘return’ key, may help), and it’ll advance after some sort of default time delay. So, it’s playable despite the missing images.

Cliche INCETON game
INCEL MC.
INCEL TON cross promotion
INCEL TON forced sissy drama
INCEL TON forced voyeur fetish with ugly boys.

INCEL TON gay grooming cliche.

I really liked the story, well written and interesting. Graphics are good with animations. Maybe there should be different endings and paths, by the way it is a great game. For me it is a 4,5 on 5.