Tropicali [v0.9a] [Story Anon]

I frankly do not like FemDom content – I ESPECIALLY do not like that it’s with the first girl in the game to fuck MC. I do not like that his Half Sister has any contact with the maid (who should properly belong JUST to MC) AND that she bitches him out in her very first scene without any input from the player at all. The apology directly afterward does not help; because it SHOULD NOT have happened in the first place. Mio as a character does not need to exist, and she SHOULD be able to have the tables turned and be completely submissive. There’s NO reason for the asshole MC to have “already sold the place” when it would have required BOTH himself and his half sister to agree to that – and then like the dev either somehow thinks the MC would be retarded enough to forget that point; or is actually retarded enough themselves to not understand tonal whiplash as a concept when the MC says Hey, let’s RUN THIS PLACE! (WHICH YOU HAVE TO OWN IT TO ACTUALLY FUCKING DO PROPERLY)

On top of that, the maid hates you if you actually MAKE her do what she claims you CAN make her do (and it cuts off a lewd scene which is BULLSHIT) and then after that the first time I choose the sexual option with her it said Sexual Harassment; FULL INTERCOURSE IS RAPE. NOT SEXUAL HARASSMENT DEV. It also didn’t show the actual orgasm; but has a pregnancy stat. So search me why it didn’t show MC comes inside of her. There’s the fact that the first one it makes sense to hire based on the pricing of the other buildings (and they could have started MC with at least $10 k if they were going to be dickish enough to sell his own property out from under him to a character that’s literally designed JUST to undercut his importance) says MC taught her about sex… BUT – He doesn’t do that until her next scene! So the confession is JUST there to give Mio a reason to be unreasonbly pissed off with MC; when it’s NOT actually her hotel if the Dev had ANY clue about the way this game should properly be written. She can RUN THE DAMNED PLACE WITHOUT OWNING IT!

It’s a good thing this was only a demo, because within the first ten minutes just with that first bullshit sex scene and telling me the MC gave away any right to actual power he had in the establishment of HIS hotel – I wouldn’t bloody play it. Mio can still be in the roster WITHOUT putting the MC into debt that should NOT need to be there. It would be hard enough to build profit, without having to dig out of the freaking hole you put him in that again, he should not be in. Period. Half sister is still incest by the way, so the game is ALWAYS going to need a patch just because Devs can’t fuck off with that taboo for five seconds. It’s not taboo if it’s in every other damned game!

Also, I don’t see a reason to write in Spanish, when 90% of the other dialogue is in english. Just write “speaking in Spanish.” You’re done. Those who know the language would be able to interpret it. Those who expect the game to be properly in English when most of the writing otherwise is, will not need to go cross eyed trying to read through the subtitles. If Mio, Gloria and the maid are examples of what we can expect; and the only nice one is literally called a retard, then no. I don’t even see a reason to like the possibility of pregnancy in this game. It’s also NOT a harem. Because the dev has taken away any sense of POWER in the fantasy, from the player, to start with. So Mio if this is GOING to be a harem at any point had better hand over the damned deed the second she joins the fucking harem. Other than that, the dev needs to learn to write in the genre, or not put it in the tags. Again, it does NOT matter how hot you draw the characters if almost all of them will be assholes.