In Maids and Maidens, you play as a young, successful executive of a Tech company. You’ve had plenty of one-night-stands and casual flings in the past but never really had a serious relationship. Now that you just bought your dream house, and your dream promotion is just around the corner, you can finally focus on your love life. There will be a number of options for you to pursue, but you’re not the kind of person to be satisfied with just one, are you?
Installation:
1- Extract and run.
Developer: Raybae Games
Censored: No
Version: 0.12.0
Language: English
Genre: 3DCG, Animated, Big Ass, Big Tits, Creampie, Dating Sim, FFM, Handjob, Lactation, Male Domination, Male Protagonist, Oral Sex, Spanking, Vaginal Sex
v0.12.0
1600+ new lines
730+ new images
90+ new animations
Download for Windows/ Linux
Download for Windows/ Linux - Compressed
Download for Mac
Download for Mac - Compressed
Download for Android
- swipe down to hide the ui
- swipe left to roll back
- swipe right to start skipping of text
- swipe 2x left&right to open the game menu
- swipe up&down to toggle a small window with memory usage information
- longpress the save file thumbnail in the save/load screen to delete this slot
Download Update Only (v0.11.0->0.12.0)
Download Mod
Features:
This mod adds an in-game walkthrough that highlights dialogue options that give points and lead to the best scenes. Also now includes my first cheat mod.
Installation:
Extract file from file to the \game folder and overwrite when prompted.
MAC:
Unzip the mod -> Right click being a dik -> Click “Show Package Contents” -> Open the “Contents/Resources/autorun” folder -> Hold the Option key and drag the folder named “game” from the mod into the “autorun” folder -> Click merge
Download Gallery Mod
Installation:
Extract file from file to the \game folder and overwrite when prompted.
Anonymous
This is one fucked up harem game, either the woman are married or have a boyfriend, are pregnant or have a child, and most of them want a open relationship. Needless to say i didn’t choose any of them.
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Thank you Jesus. Someone else pointed it out.
I was literally coming here to write that in the first two seconds you meet a rando that tells you her former maid is looking for a job because she got pregnant; and then you meet your secretary who is “obsessed with MC’s life” but somehow not only married but also pregnant. (I care less that she’s married than that she’s pregnant already… that should be the MC’s job – and frankly should be retconned to have always been MC’s kid if the dev wants to fix this)
The point in pregnancy as a tag and as a kink is generally speaking: getting them that way. I’m really tired of having to try to explain that when Devs pull this shit. I think maybe this dev misunderstands what an “open” relationship is. Because Harem is not open. It’s multiple women all commit exclusively to ONE man. That’s about as closed as you can get. While allowing that the MAN frankly can add whomever he likes to the Harem. For the most part. He might check in with the other females, but it’s rare that even if one has an enemy, any girl in the harem would deny the harem leader what they want.
anonymous
I know that i given you a hard time because you always go off on harem games, but with this one i give you credit, because it’s as if they don’t know what to come on with anymore.
Anonymous
The fuck happened to this site. They even removed “Mother’s love ” game
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When you fuck around with the base of the site, you’d have to delete the links that lead to the pages. They’re likely in process of adding them all back in. Wait long enough, and it’ll pop back up again on the latest updated games page. Considering the amount of games they had on site – it’s gonna be a LONG assed process.
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And on top of actually SHOWING a Gynecologist’s appointment that since it’s NOT the MC’s baby (that we know of…) I guarantee you NO ONE PLAYING is going to actually give a toss about – you LITERALLY have the bitch your rival is treating like a lapdog commit CORPORATE ESPIONAGE!!! [You’ve literally just made it retarded to want to date her – and I swear to fuck if there are any consequences to the MC for that bullshit move on YOUR part because you don’t know how to PROPERLY design a fucking harem with ENDEARING females… I am not going to play any further. Nor ever care what the fuck you come up with in other games]
What. The. Fuck. Is. Wrong. With. You. Dev? There are things you just DON’T do (especially not this early and with no actual justification) in a harem. We haven’t known the supposedly submissive bitch long enough to form an opinion about her and you’re going to screw the pooch with her that hard??? Is it really that hard for you to write a compelling story – oh wait. Jameela is a 14 year old bride – who was turned into a prostitute at 16, because Why? It sure isn’t realism for fuck sakes. Maybe I am asking too much here. Jesus.
Thus far, Day 6 and there’s NOTHING really to recommend this game. At all. If you don’t go to the club when Carol tells you that you should, you meet Jameela. If you do go to the club; you get nowhere except a chubby chick that frankly I wish you fuckers would stop putting in your damned games. It’s a FANTASY. Body types DON’T have to conform to DEI. And FUCK Sam entirely as a character, right from her introduction = if she’s that “talented” as an engineer, she should have the brains not to mouth off to a direct superior. Who is stated to be the FUTURE CEO. Think about that Genius. She can be cocky as far as it comes to her actual work, but you don’t get to make her that presumptively arrogant and then just LET HER GET AWAY WITH IT. Because YOU assume the player wants to fuck her. She would have to be rendered A LOT more attractively for that kind of leeway to even remotely begin to be a consideration. But hell, at least she’s not pregnant. Not that I should give you any bright ideas.
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On top of that, why do I think Olivia is a self insert character?
There’s the fact Laura’s daughters are not on the list. The lawyer girl, whenever we meet her isn’t on the list. Tiffany’s step mom isn’t on the list. Most of those that are, are sitting at fucking 2’s. Laura’s also “sterile” for no fucking reason. You really don’t get the pregnancy kink do you? (There’s a point in the cheat section that mentions Sisters Love – I am unclear as to whether that means MC’s Adopted Sister or Laura’s Twins?) Either way it’s bullshit that if you DO choose to go to the club when Carol says you should, you can talk to them = and get exactly fuck all out of doing so.
Sam is on top of what I previously wrote – Lesbian! (Why the absolute fuck do you assholes all think it’s fine to put a Lesbian on the Harem LIST??? She’s literally NOT attracted to men. You even fucking have her dating the goddamned self insert… Which is a level of narcissicism that frankly melts my mind. Because it could go either way. Sam OR Olivia if not both are YOUR self inserts) There is NO FUCKING POINT TO A LESBIAN IN A HAREM GAME WHEN THE HAREM LEAD IS NOT FEMALE!
There’s the fact that the ONLY reason that FIA agent is even NECESSARY in the game is because you made one of the characters that MC is attached to (but frankly has 2 points and so much mental trauma I’m not marking her as anything except exactly like Jameela = Captain Let Me Blue Ball The Hell Out of You Player) is in the country illegally. A situation you ONLY put in the game to give SOMEONE ELSE POWER OVER THE GUY THAT SHOULD BE FUCKING DOMINANT!!! (I swear to good Christ, if it’s Kira; you better give me the option to personally wring her goddamned neck) and while we’re at it – Fuck this route could have FAR REACHING Consequences: The ONLY consequence should be the PLAYER chooses that the MC should treat Yumi as his permanent fucking SUBMISSIVE. Period. Dominance is NOT Corrupt – you CAN fucking be gentle, and caring and KIND as a Dom dipshit. It is about her WILLINGLY GIVING POWER (And her BODY) OVER to MC. Not an excuse to be an asshole. If you don’t understand the truth about BDSM relationships you DON’T get to write them. But I don’t know why I’d expect anything else. You seem to want to make this guy every girl’s bent over bitch. That’s YOUR power trip. You straight up don’t get the whole point of a harem game.
Anonymous
Funny how most the specific content complaints unravel when you actually play the rest of the released content. The barren woman Laura? You get her pregnant. Jameela, you fuck her (and get some head from Laura at same time). The chubby – you also get a 3some with her hot roomate. Lesbian Sam gives you a handjob, and I suspect will be brought in as a 3rd to the lesbian couple later (the partner is Bi, and shes currently using a dildo mold of your dick to get off). You have options for a “ceremony” where you will get to hate fuck Kira (not yet in content, but the plan to do so is in content). We know the perpetrators of the blackmail etc. to be Elder and Jr Hughes. Tiff – the Hughes daughter gets pregnant with your kid in addition to Laura. It is alluded that the cult is involved with the Hughes as well when the step mom and Jr discuss “Mother”. As far as single mom and pregnant secretary… its a game so I have qualms about someone elses kid, and few games have legitimate good scenes of fucking a pregnant woman the way this did. Seems like youre just too impatient to let the content unroll.
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I’m not impatient at all – the kink of pregnancy is generally and MORE COMMONLY about GETTING them that way. It’s not that hard to figure out if you actually have the kink. I don’t value pregnancy because I want to fuck a pregnant woman: I value it because it’s proof that we can do what nature intends, and it’s a mark that SHE values ME enough to want to risk continuance of our bloodlines. Because she values the traits I have, and myself as a person to want to go through all of that. It’s literally one of the most intimate experiences possible between two people, and an incredibly weighted choice to make. It’s one of the indellible signs of feminine SUBMISSION. But fuck that; let’s completely misrepresent all of that, by making one of the girls ALREADY pregnant – while also being TAKEN. (Which frankly also unncessarily reinforces the fact, if you want to consider realism and ramifications. IE she made her choice, and because she made her choice she is in fact far more likely to STICK with him as a partner than choose to leave – if Luke HADN’T been written as a massive douche to excuse the fact she’s going to)
I would’ve been fine with Carol Married – I can handle Netori content; It IRKS me that she started off pregnant (specifically because then if you start a relationship with her after she gives birth MC is on the hook for a kid that ISN’T HIS – in a Harem: Which is a POWER FANTASY!) * The “chubby” one could learn to exercise and slim down a bit, and I would have far less of a problem with her character. My problem with Ally isn’t that she’s in the game – it’s that she was not an appealing option when you were told to go to the club, and she was also THE ONLY option that might garner points. When the game also states specifically that you can CHOOSE whom you do and do not want to be involved with, in the overview… and then she’s also forced on you later in the story. I’m definitely GOING to do something with her hot friend, that was always the plan… but there’s no reason we can’t get a shy, bit husky girl who also wants to be determined to be confident and gets there by being willing to admit part of it is her physical state and then WORKING on the problem.
The girl didn’t need to be “barren,” and factually isn’t in the first place if we CAN get her pregnant mate – that’s then JUST there to cock block the players who want Pregnancy content done the right way. The same way the “Lesbian” is. There NEVER needs to be an actual Lesbian in a harem. Females in a harem game are meant to be, and SHOULD ALWAYS be at least MOSTLY focused on the Harem Leader. They can be undecided, but leaning to MC, or they can be secretly in lust/love with MC and working on how to show it… but the focus should always be MAIN CHARACTER. Not some dickheaded self insert that’s literally only Bi because that’s the only way that the dev could actually semi reasonably SWING getting both characters into the harem eventually. Having the MC allow a mold of his cock to be created as a dildo, actually says to me that Olivia DID like MC more – which makes the entire bullshit arc that much more needlessly convoluted. Frankly, Sam was perfectly fine as the “Big Tiddie Techie Goth Gamer Girlfriend” and Olivia didn’t need to exist (which is in part why I think she’s a self insert) Both of them being Bi leaves the door wide open. It’s still respectful to that community as a whole and counts as inclusive for those that care about that. Doing it any other way is both disrespectful to the player; to the genre at the core in what it’s meant to be, and to people who actually are Lesbian. It’s unnecessary and JARRING. Jeff actually discusses Conversion Therapy for fuck sakes.
It’s jarring in the same way his dickheaded “adopted sister” literally incriminates MC for NO FUCKING REASON – when she could’ve just hired a private detective or researched him herself and COME to MC to mend fences for god’s sake. Fiona could’ve been put in the story after things break to the public, and she wants to set the record straight; then SHE doesn’t come off as a bloody ANTAGONIST – just to ham-hand her way into a story where she doesn’t need to exist (and we’re supposed to just forgive it? Want to pursue a deeper relationship because the Dev couldn’t find a smooth way to re-introduce Paige, or chose to reflect on the MC being a “pervert.” According to her, nothing actually even happened and the only reason the fucking reporter would have wanted that story in the first place does not come off well. There were better, much less ruffling ways to introduce either character as I stated above. As it stands, I would tell Laura, Fiona and Paige to absolutely fuck right off and stay entirely the hell away from me if I were the MC, from that point onward) Laura and Paige especially at this point. I can see exactly why MC decided to fuck off and never contact her. If she really didn’t want him that way, and told him so – there’s NOTHING to pursue; and you’ve blocked off a listed character right from the start… for NO good reason on top of potentially besmirching the repute of the MC unnecessarily.
Laura has already saddled you with a maid whose SISTER is a massively more involved problem than she ever needed to be; who also started off recently having given birth, absolutely unnecessarily. While being “Barren.” There’s NOTHING to recommend her – and frankly when I went jogging in the park and she used a veiled threat on the MC I was already half set on not having a damned thing to do with her. Her “Daughters” aren’t necessary in the game if they’re not eventually going to be on the list themselves – they are there for further cock blocking, and the notion that Harem is Not Okay. To me, the way you fix the more aggressive of the pair is to BREAK her to the same Submission her sister is very likely inclined to. I don’t mind if it takes the whole damned game – that’s just fair vengeance. A viable reward for the writer being this much of a douche to their audience. The whole way through.
Because the damned DEV doesn’t understand the formula of a Harem or what ANY of the kinks they’re messing with are actually about. Or why they are important to those that value them. You yourself mention you have qualms about them having someone else’s kid, and yet you call me impatient. That’s goddamned hilarious. I routinely play every game I comment on, unless I specifically state in the comments that I have tapped out, to the finish. To be able to properly comment on and review them. As thoroughly as possible. I sometimes make comments while playing, if content in narrative or mechanics piss me off that much. Doesn’t make it any less a very detailed review. Dude; I once took a 484 question personality test to try to find a job, and the answer for my strongest trait was “impulse control.” Patience is not my problem. Stupid, willfully ignorant, or needlessly short-sighted writing IS my problem with this game – I have actually continued the game and will do so to the end of the update regardless. What I am doing with these comments is pointing out Narrative problems that don’t need to exist, or actively bork the kink they’re supposed to represent.
Rupert for example does NOT need his own harem – and should NOT be fucking Celine; unless the point is we take her away from him, and make him watch us fucking her to breed = because if he IS the antagonist of the game… that’s how you win. Felicia didn’t need to be rendered 666 years old, and not on the list. 40 to maybe 42 would still have been acceptable, whether or not she’s married. And the Dev NEEDS to decide what the fuck to do about Kira. Because there’s no reason she should be on the list if she’s actually MC’s Enemy. Yumi doesn’t need a consequences warning just because the player wants FOR ONCE to actually have an Alpha dialogue, and frankly Kira should absolutely be the one that MOST applies to. Full stop. I do NOT need to see, nor care to engage with “hate” fucking. She can be the Domme with everyone else; I get to BREAK her. Because that would be my choice as the Harem Leader. From the start, the MC does not actually need a business rival you don’t actually even get to do anything with yet by your own admission, AND a main antagonist who’s basically his dark mirror. But yep. The problem is my patience. I’ve spent probably a good twenty minutes typing all of this, so let’s see if you actually bother to read it. Then you can talk to me about patience.
I do very much appreciate the heads up, it is helpful; but one would not be necessary if the Dev didn’t seem to be actively going out of their way to potentially piss half their given audience entirely off. I’ll also appreciate the fact you at least read enough of my posts to reply with a credible response, and took the time to do so. I’ve always said I don’t mind if people respond to disagree with me. So long as they actually have a viable argument and aren’t just posting TL;DR or the like, or insults. Which is mostly what I get. Also, the caps are strictly emphasis to mark import, and I wish I didn’t have to point that out.
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What was the point of introducing Zenya? (who should probably be black, with a name like that, frankly – unless she’s European and there’s a nuance to the name Sonia, that’s possible too) Sam jerking the MC off doesn’t fix the issue that she’s GAY (and yes – you’re an asshole Dev for cock blocking the literal hottest rendered girl in the game WHILE ACTUALLY PUTTING HER ON THE HAREM LIST – IF YOU’RE NOT GOING TO EVER LET US AS THE MC FUCK HER. WITH HIS REAL DICK. NOT SOME BULLSHIT DILDO!!!) Bi, or Curious would have been the best way to handle her. Now the best you can do is “Confused” (which is still problematic language) to start to lean her into the idea she might be more into men than she’ll ever want to admit = and that admission when it does come I am willing to bet, will still take the entire damned game to actually get to. : /
This character does legitimately piss me off in how she was handled. Because like SO. MANY. OTHERS. You did not have to write her this way. At all. That was your conscious decision; and you did it KNOWING you were denying your audience a person who should rightly just BE in the fucking harem. For no legitimately GOOD reason. Olivia does not need to exist. Or she was perfectly fine to be straight up willing to fuck MC to start with – make Sam lividly jealous to the point she’d have to question WHY she was jealous and come to the self same realizations that you’re attempting to (way too slowly – and mostly to blue ball us) vest her with. Which would naturally end with her wanting to join the harem anyway, because she “isn’t as gay as she always thought.” [It’s still a bullshit narrative, but it is part of the power fantasy whether I agree with it or not]
Bianca – as a character; does not need to exist. She also does not need to convolute the narrative of things between MC and Paige. BUT – You show a creampie scene between her and MC = THE KID BELONGS TO MC!!! [Do NOT do this ANY other way – or I will have nothing to do with this fucking character, or any other you introduce from this point onward. You have FUCKED AROUND WITH THINGS ENOUGH] * She’s actually compelling as a potential POLAR opposite to Carol, and SHOULD be allowed to be such. Straight up. No bullshit – no fucking around with “yeah I let you cum in me but it’s his kid because he did it more often.” Durh. There is NO REASON for half the cast to be as convoluted or retardedly implemented (yes that is the correct use of that word by dictionary definition) as you have written them, just to be contrarian about the dynamics of a HAREM.
Fiona and Paige’s intros were absolutely backward – and you BETTER fucking make it that Paige DOES actually happen to be attracted to the MC (There’s no point in saying the dream sequence where you admit that she’s lying is MC making it up = that’s way too much fish-tailing, needlessly disingenuous to the audience about something you’re halfway trying to BOTH present as an actual problem and handwave away as of course it’s not one. It WILL make more than just me tap the fuck out) and wanted a relationshp: She also knew he was going away, she couldn’t follow and frankly had fucked confidence so she shot herself in the foot… and GOT SCARED OF FIA Agent boy so she bungled the whole thing even worse… and is WILLING TO DO “ANYTHING” TO MAKE IT UP TO MC! That’s how you fix the massive dumpster fire you didn’t have to make of her introduction, and keep her ENDEARING to the player base. It’s really not that hard to figure out.
The further I play, the less I find anything redeeming about ANY of these characters. The renders are not attractive enough to warrant this much headache (except Sam – and SEE ABOVE!) and there are no sex sounds to further engagement with the lewd content – that because you’d rather write war and peace in both painting yourself into corners that don’t need to be there in the first place as well as ham-handedly struggling your way out of them, is too far between scenes to actually get anywhere with. Fiona didn’t need to come off as antagonistic; and doesn’t get to be defensive to the MC that points out she is an antagonist until proven otherwise. Fuck me.
No - This is my last comment. Disagree if you want; I am DONE!
Nope. No. No, no no no no… You DO NOT get to have the bitch deny THAT hard = LITERALLY SAY SHE NEVER TESTED IT; BECAUSE SHE WANTS TO BELIEVE HER HUSBAND IS THE FATHER – ALL you had to do was take two seconds before the kid came home to have her ADMIT WHAT SHE CLEARLY FUCKING KNOWS. Jesus. Go fuck yourself dev. Absolutely. Unequivocally from this point onward, and this is going to be the LAST time I download a damned thing you do.
That’s it. I am out – because you couldn’t be bothered to just give ONE clear fucking non bullshit answer. Screw it. There’s absolutely NOTHING worth this much headache for – and the worst part is a) You know the correct fucking answer – you lead into it so hard a blind goddamned literal retard would know the right answer, and b) you’re consciously DENYING THE AUDIENCE THE RIGHT ANSWER. With someone that doesn’t even happen to be on the list – and now never should be. Go fuck yourself. Six ways to Sunday, and twice every day afterward. How’s that for “patience.” I knew. I knew you would pull this crap with her and I gave you the chance to prove me wrong. You couldn’t even give ONE definitive power fantasy answer. Without being an incredible cock block…
No - Bianca pisses me off so badly I had to make one final comment. This character's arc if included in the harem, is ENTIRELY UNNECESSARY!
Bianca literally states that “You don’t get to come here and ruin… blah, blah blah”
Is. She. GOING. To. Be. A. Part. Of The HAREM = and if YES > You have effectively made her far too much of an unlikeable ASSHOLE who DID NOT TAKE RESPONSIBILITY FOR HER OWN FUCKING ACTIONS – NEVER CONTACTED MC to say Hey by the way… You MIGHT be the father of a kid… so, uhm, there’s that. Nope. She just married the fucking asshole right out of college and went on her married way. She is NOT the victim of anything but herself = you are actively taking FAMILY away from a GUY THAT’S LOST HIS FAMILY. DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT THAT ACTUALLY MEANS?!? [and this is RIGHT THE FUCK AFTER A USELESS PSYCHOLOGY SESSION WITH MRS. FUCKING ROBINSON!!! COME THE FUCK ON]
You have NO FUCKING IDEA HOW PAINFUL THAT SHIT IS TO A GUY DO YOU??? I’ll bet not if I’m right about Olivia. But then it doesn’t matter to you. To most guys that have the pregnancy kink; but especially to the MC with the backstory you fucking gave him! IF It’s MC’s Kid: he ABSOLUTELY has the right to fucking KNOW it. She does NOT get the right to withhold that information; and it’s NOT HIM that ruined a DAMNED Thing in her relationship. You fuckwit Dev. You realize, this sort of shit is EXACTLY why most players DON’T like the idea of NTR. We WANT to know that the kid is OURS. Definitively.
So no. If she IS going to be a part of the harem eventually = you’re an unmitigated ASSHOLE for how you handled that; because it would’ve taken her THREE TO FIVE WORDS before her kid walked in the door (which is YOU COCK BLOCKING EVERYTHING!!!) to CONFIRM IT. Then you can go from there = THEN you can get to her reasoning, her justification. The plea for her to leave them alone… MC going along with it – and HER EVENTUALLY COMING TO HIM when she decides that isn’t in fact what she really wants after all; but you GIVE THE AUDIENCE CONFIRMATION AS WELL. Dipshit. Then you can pull whatever drama that makes her hook back up with MC. Because she KNOWS SHE DOES NOT BELONG WITH PAUL!!! At this point – the way you handled this bullshit character, there’s NO reason for any further engagement AT ALL. She and her husband can die in a ditch as far as I am concerned. If she’s both going to be that patently obvious, and that fucking witless about it. There is no WORSE way you could’ve introduced an already pointless dream sequence girl, as a sustained character in a harem game.
As I said before. I am done. I tapped out because nothing else in your game could piss me off more. I don’t want it to – because that seems like it’s the ONLY thing you’re TRYING to do. With literally EVERY. CHARACTER’S ARC. Bianca went from a chance to actually create a legitimate point of HOPE, to the last fucking straw… because you don’t understand the CORE of the fucking Genre that even in the overview you admit you’re trying to create. There are things you DON’T do. Lines you DON’T cross – and you have crossed each one, too many times over. It’s not about patience. It’s about actively going against EVERY. SINGLE. GOOD. THING. ABOUT. A GIVEN. GENRE. Willfully. Then expecting your audience is somehow going to wait around while you sort out how that “doesn’t matter” because it’s “all going to work out in the end.”
It does not matter if at the END of the game, literally every girl that can ends up married to and happily pregnant by the MC. I am NEVER going to bother downloading this again. I will never get to the end of the game to see it. Just because you couldn’t be bothered to state definitively that a child that had the potential to be (STATE: NOT HINT AT – NOT PLAY FUCKING COY WITH SO YOU CAN FARM DRAMA IN THE STORY LINE WHEN SHE INVARIABLY HAS THE MARRIAGE FALL APART, AND DOES DECIDE TO PURSUE THE MC LIKE SHE SHOULD’VE DONE A DECADE AGO!) the MC’s free and clear, actually is. I don’t get why that would be so hard. The rest of your narrative would be – mostly – fine. You could’ve worked in the idea that her marriage wasn’t perfect and AFTER said admission came to light = seeing MC again brought back memories ETC. That… You can build on. Done the way you have, it’s JUST a brick wall that cuts the character off from the start. Because she was a completely needy retard one night, and can’t accept the fact it only takes ONE time to get pregnant. By the RIGHT man…
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List of characters that SHOULD be in the HAREM PRONTO:
*** Bianca = If it’s MC’s Kid – this is NOT a debate. The longer you wait on putting her with MC; the more she’ll have to genuinely apologize to the MC for, because of how badly she as a character handled their last meeting (The wording says she KNOWS it’s bullshit she wants to believe – you’re hinting way too hard not to do something with this bitch and as I’ve mentioned; it pisses me off) You were a massive asshole to the MC with this character: You owe it to Both MC, and HIS Daughter to fix this fucking issue that didn’t have to be one. ASAP!
– Sam: Also NON negotiable. MC has WAY more points with her than he does with Olivia. NEITHER of them needed to be Gay/Bi. You’ve now built in some bullshit mythical excuse for MC to be the UBER CHAD = HANDLE THIS.
– Paige: You don’t get to make a character fuck the MC over that badly and NOT make her submissive to MC.
– Rahee: She belongs to MC. No prostitution – NO Nude modeling. She can find actual model work or learn ANY other trade and build a life where she’s not dependant on MC = This does not mean she can’t WANT to be dependant on her literal savior. It’s not even a complex.
– Nora/Marli/Mia = You were building to this anyway, and NO. You DON’T get to cock block pregnancy content. You made them younger; they can fucking deal with being “in the family way” sooner than they might have thought they’d want. So can Laura.
** Celine – As an absolute BROKEN BREEDING BITCH: You have already overcomplicated the plot with way too much bullshit that the MC SHOULD NOT BE DOING. No One But The MC gets to win. This is a HAREM. There is no such thing as a harem game where the ANTAGONIST wins.
What Just plain doesn’t work Period:
– Bianca. I’ve already gone through the why thoroughly. It’s not unsalvageable (debateably, if you’re EXTREMELY generous – or particularly want every possible sex scene and don’t care about semantics = which would explain Carol & Maria…) You went through the trouble to re-introduce her for a reason. If it was just to be an ass to your audience, you shouldn’t have even bothered.
Sam being Gay: She can THINK that she’s gay. She can even be certain that she’s gay (she’s a strong enough personality to be that stubborn about it) but she shouldn’t ACTUALLY be Gay. That does not work. There’s no reason for her to have been added to the list, and play the Best Friend Without Benefits bullshit. In a HAREM.
Blake: You have the protege of a company in the running for CEO playing fucking James Bond. Nuff Said. He has no badge. He has no combat training. He has NO WEAPONS. He has a cadre of helpless females and younger people to take care of. The whole immigrant sex trafficking thing was STUPID. Also, Jameela & Rahee need to be the ones most inclined, and to actually give MC the most babies. (Marli would also work – for the raw irony) Give Blake her one big win; move her to a higher rank, and/or let her be the MC’s personal security at the company for better job security, a big raise and less corruption – that way we might actually get to fuck/breed this girl sometime before Hailey’s Comet passes around again.
The Family: You messed up as far as I read = it should be his FATHER that he doesn’t know. You said there was a miscarriage, and implied there was a second partner, that WAS successful. I’m going to assume his father was actually THE FATHER; because nothing else about this makes sense. [Also Kira = literally just signed up to get bred by MC, and if his seed is that potent, Imani as her sister SHOULD be pregnant with MC’s kid now] You want to involve Jess in that bullshit, while potentially burning it to the ground. When you don’t even know all of the members, what resources they have, what combat training they have. These people “killed” Kira’s Mom and ACTUALLY KILLED MC’s “Mom?” (Jesus Christ this plot point was bungled) So you’re essentially signing Jess up to get bred too. Yippee? [I’m not complaining about the breeding – but YOU need to decide whether or not “The Family” is actually an enemy, or a more useful TOOL * and if it is a Tool, NO that’s not an invite for a Corrupt MC path, don’t get any bright ideas]
The deal with Hughes: You literally had Celine, CELINE!!! spoil the fact that Tiff is pregnant by MC. TIFFANY NEEDS TO BE THE ONE TO DO THAT TO MC. DIRECTLY. ASAP. She already wanted “No Strings.” The ONLY way she proves loyalty to MC against the rest of her rat bastard family is to DEAL WITH THIS. Not Ghost the fucker. Come on. That’s on top of trying for a hostile take over, when MC isn’t even in power to block a damned thing. On top of having Kira be a bitch about being in the running – Given how much help he’s been with The Family – it SHOULD NOT cost me Love Points to get her to drop the fuck out of the running. I fuck her. I breed her = She belongs SUBMISSIVELY to MC. That’s her arc. That’s ALL that it needs to be. That, would be Gratitude, and she’ll still be in a position of influence in the company because she is happily MC’s wife?!?/lover/baby momma. Capisce? It’s NOT that hard NOT to try so hard to fuck the main character over. At every possible turn in the road. STOP making it seem like it’s NOT going to be MC who gets to be CEO. And while we’re on it…
Allison: Decide which way with her you want to go. Because she can say she wants to leave = and SHE ABSOLUTELY DOES NOT GET THAT RIGHT. There is no point in having put her on the list; letting MC CUM INSIDE OF HER WITHOUT PROTECTION SEVERAL TIMES NOW – and mentioning the Super Sperm bullshit, if she was ever ACTUALLY going to LEAVE. Do you really think your audience is as thick as you’ve rendered her? (unncessarily)
Carol: Being pregnant (and not by the MC) You could easily retcon this with a memory. An office party at Halloween or Christmas or even Valentine’s. Hell, I don’t care if it’s Saint Patrick’s Day. She got tipsy, made her move – BEFORE she was serious with Luke; MC smashes that pussy, she gets pregnant and doesn’t know it at the time because it was before the super seed revelations = Bingo. She rushes into marriage thinking the kid belongs to Luke (Luke can start to be a dick because he always suspected… and a guy is POSSESSIVE. If the timing doesn’t add up he’ll put the dots together and that’s a much better explanation for why he’s such a dick to her – while still having been such a dick to her so it doesn’t negate her excuse in justification afterward) Nothing changes really, the rest of the course follows as it has… except the kid is DEFINITELY MC’s.
So much of this game was done either to fuck the MC over as much as possible, or as contrarian as it could be managed when it shouldn’t be. Very possibly just to piss off your audience. The game did have some potential. I did play through til the credits rolled. There’s just too much bullshit in the game that seems like it’s there out of vindiction. The harem is NOT a harem if one girl that should be in the harem, is not. The PLAYER can choose not to add a girl to the harem – the girl herself should not ever choose to cut MC out of her life, without recourse for him to decide if he wants her there in the first damned place.
Seriously: Bianca owes the MC back 10 or so years on that kid’s life. There is NO way she can effectively fix that fuck up… and you NEED to make her acknowledge that point and be COMPLETELY SUBMISSIVE sexually to the MC, as the least she can do to assauge the audience. Because she did not need to be handled this way. There did not need to be competition for his job. There did not need to be competition for who owns the damned company. There SHOULD NOT have been so much legal trouble. But you keep writing yourself into corners you don’t need to.
That, is why I am done. I played to the end; there is too much wrong that was handled about as well as the roughest sandpaper, and I don’t have the energy to care where you go next. What you do with whom. You lost ALL of my investment the moment you pulled that “You don’t have the right” crap with Bianca. When several days later you also in thought writing CONFIRM that it’s ALMOST CERTAINLY MC’S DAUGHTER! You, as the DEV Don’t have the right to do that, and think afterward that she’s salvagable as a character, or that you’re going to keep a sustained Sub count. You can all call me single minded, short sighted. Retarded, insane, IMPATIENT (after playing a game that took me like 12 real time hours at least if not more to sit through…Just going to point out I couldn’t share what plot points I think are absolutely wrong if I’d used the skip button all that much) narrow view of “Harem” [Like I don’t know the exact building blocks of the genre at all, when so many of you Devs think it’s any sort of “open” relationship] or any other insult you want. You probably will anyway. It won’t matter if you do. I’m taking this out of my games to wait on folder, so I won’t see the replies whether you do dogpile or not.
Anonymous
i just want to get off on girls why so much words?!
Incel is a Cult
Tags: cheating, harem, prostitution
Incel estimation level: 6.8/10.
Be careful out there, folks.