Sunshine Love [Ch. 3 v1.00i Extras][Final] [Mr Dots Games]

Waiting the “cuckqueen” end with a lot of girls… Nothing. Abandoned path.
Boring ends.
1 average end. But another 6-7 are boring.

WOKE writer. Always same boring ends.

Okay, on this one I made 3 seperate not particularly flattering reviews… Critiquing the story.

So to sum up: Nicole either DID NOT need to be in the game at all; and actively hinders YOU in the story… OR it SHOULD BE A HAREM ENDING!

A) She gives you no option NOT to be in an “open relationship” (but also never takes the opportunity to fuck other men = the dev WANTED to be an edgelord and fuck with the audience, but also did not want to deal with the direct backlash he would receive because that genre is NOT generally well loved by most of the community) and is actively invested in your pursuit of other women. To the point she will ask you to [ILLEGALLY] cam session a scene with Ashley (he did not get her consent to do so first…) and MC does it twice with two different girls.

Nicole also says the only reason she didn’t fuck someone else (I’ve been tempted… NOT NECESSARY TO SHARE WITH YOUR ALREADY CONFLICTED BOYFRIEND. Or the Audience who NEEDS a better reason to ROOT for her!) was that she didn’t want to deal with what MC goes through. Being too attached and breaking up was too hard for her… wah. It’s EXACTLY WHY YOU DON’T SUGGEST AN OPEN RELATIONSHIP IN THE FIRST PLACE. Same concept as Divorce. You CANNOT take the wording back. She is properly a cuckqueen. The Golden Dildo the MC noticed was ALSO NOT NECESSARY. It’s fine if she had a vibrator; but making it bigger than her current boyfriend’s dick is just stupid. Period. He’s ALREADY HORSE COCKED as far as most girls in the game are concerned. What, did you want to fuck an Elephant???

All she had to do was say, I’m giving you a hall pass for three months, and you are definitely MY GUY. I’m NOT interested in ANYONE ELSE. Clear as crystal. They could have talked about the fact she’s dragged back into the shit in Chapter 2. MC actively catches her out; and it doesn’t even let the PLAYER get pissed at her. She gives you 3 options to break up – so really at the end of the day how fucking badly did SHE WANT the relationship? Come the fuck on man. However, IF you made it a harem = make MC actually do as he thought about and TALK to Nicole about moving to Sunshine Bay and TALK about her being into women in 3way relationships… or maybe him being able to KEEP the relationships he had AND her, as a family in the longrun, then you could have organically worked in a harem ending. But they don’t talk to each other as a couple. She wears the pants, and it’s funny because even if she wears the pants – which should mean she was having A LOT of sex with random guys to sow her own oats if you’d actually done the can of worms you wanted to open up – she never actually does anything in that vein except bitch if she doesn’t get her way.

Now to the girls:

Raven = Your half sister. Already a bad start. Best Friend more likely with Incest Disabled. (Easier to sell)
She is an asshole. Period. To start with I’m ignoring the intro to the Hotel. That whole thing is bad enough and the PLAYER SHOULD be given the right to tell her which cliff to jump off when the cat’s out of the bag. Otherwise, she says there will be a full partnership. And goes back on that whenever she gets pissed; but it’s always the MC THAT’S APOLOGIZING – AND NO, sex does NOT count as an apology! Also one of Two girls that starts the game with a BOYFRIEND! (You do get influence on how that pans out; but she SHOULD have been SINGLE to start with if she was going to act all possessive, jealous and or at times controlling for most of the game)

Jazmin = Token black girl. Only there for casual sex. At least up front about it, but generally forgettable.

Yuki = Token Asian/Loli = Way too much build up for really fuck all progress. Buggers off at the end back to Japan.
(Did you really NEED 3 fucking Loli girls??? I know she’s Asian but dude, Double B cup wouldn’t kill you to render. Could have given any of the three a LITTLE more in curves…) Over 18 my giddy ass.

Ashley/Trisha = SHOULD HAVE BEEN SIDE CHARACTERS TO HELP PLOT POINTS. NOT LOVE INTERESTS!
* It’s also BULLSHIT that you give Ginny an envelope that MIGHT tell her who the Daddy is; and then NEVER make her open it. That’s just baiting the player – and frankly it wouldn’t surprise me if it is the Mayor. Or D’Amico. Trisha gets bonus negative of already being fucked by the mayor, WHILE carrying on with MC = you do NOT get any influence with her on whether she keeps seeing the mayor or not. (She’s also a femdom, so be warned – there’s only ONE scene where she even gives MC a little control over sex) For her part, Ashley’s negatives are MC’s Dad’s Ex… and the fact she’s willing to fuck MC to solve her own Oedipal issues, while aware of how her daughter feels about MC. No matter which way you slice it, BOTH of these characters are ALSO Assholes.

Raven’s Cousin = Geek girl who’s shy/Loli. By the end, she won’t be shy; so there’s NO reason she shouldn’t be able to find another boyfriend. This one does piss me off however because SHE’S one of the better done characters you WANT TO PROTECT, and why the game SHOULD BE A HAREM ENDING. There did not need to be more than ONE path. Two if you count cutting off Nicole, and keeping the harem elsewise in tact. Genuinely a viable argument for the case between Nurture Vs. Nature. Because she sure as shit didn’t get her sweet heart from her Mom. (Read Yuki)

Twins – They are LITERAL WHORES. They also run an escort service; and only stop when their sister was going to get involved. They are ONLY casual sex. (doesn’t matter how hot they’re rendered, the above is a black mark as LI’s)
* Neither of them NEEDED to be involved in their father’s business, or hookers, and you’re an ass for going there.

Kristina = Literal copy of the Main Girl in Dating My Daughter. Other than that, decent enough character. Not particularly compelling because I played that game, and I know how it ends… and I still think THAT one should also have allowed for a Harem. So this is the second strike. It’s also not that imaginative to re-use a character. Doesn’t matter if you change the name. We’re NOT stupid. She IS the lynchpin that heelturns the Twins against Daddy… but it doesn’t really speak well of any of the three that she was as naive as she was written, and the twins went along with things as long as they did.

** Svetlana = ONLY accessible through a mod, likely not even an option as an ending. Is actively an enemy on Intro…
[Also one of the hottest rendered women – so fuck you VERY MUCH for that Dev]

Victoria = Latina, Bi (Did NOT need to get between you and Siscon; DID NOT need to break things off with you if Siscon refuses a Lesbian scene = which DOES NOT count as a BONUS. You ignoramus!) * Other than that, one of the four most genuinely romantic and pursuable females that make the game worthy of being a harem ending.

Connie = Literally Fucking The Boss’ Daughter. I’m not even Joking – That’s how D’Amico is generally referred to in game. She IS a nice bit of revenge, and genuinely one of the four best fleshed out LI in the game. Connie, Yuki, Ginny and Victoria honestly are the only girls in the game I would give a damn about. Three of them fuck off to do their own thing when MC ends the game (if you decide to go back to Nicole) and one of them stays where she is. If you stay at the Hotel and break things off with Nicole, I don’t know what happens. I’m NOT playing through the second chapter twice. It’s just not worth the effort. BECAUSE there’s no harem ending. Would it really have taken you THAT much more effort to render? I honestly wonder if you have an actual relationship Dev. Because the way you wrote Nicole and MC is just… massively NOT healthy.

To cap off, and this is the last time I will re-work a post Dikgames. So if you take it down, that’s on you. But then you don’t get to whine when more of the gamers would WANT an actual credible review of a given game to help them make a decision about what’s worth downloading, and almost all the comments on all your games are troll posts. I invest a fair amount of time, in both playing the games, and reviewing them. I’m not asking to be paid, but at least enough respect to keep the freaking comments up would be nice. You don’t have to agree with me. I don’t expect anyone to see things my way. But I’m not going to keep investing my time to review these bloody things if the comments are all going to just disappear in a week when I check back anyway. Anywho… I cannot recommend this game. It should have been a dating sim. Not a date everyone all at once and now you’re locked to one girl for one ending. Dating sim means you lock the girl in that you choose from the start. Not right at the blasted end. If it had either been a dating sim that locked in a girl you choose after meeting all of them – outside of the caveat of including Nicole – OR a Harem Ending HAD been coded in for all the work you do grinding points out for all of them [AND I’ll warn I was several points off with most girls to be able to even SEE their endings – EVEN THOUGH I had the walkthrough mods up and tried for EVERY point I could get out of each girl, never refusing anything with them…] it would be a different story. But that would also be true if MC was written as smart as a Lawyer should be. Or ever allowed to be Dominant in any relationship he fosters. Download it if you like; but it’s three chapters to take seperately, and it’s a time sink. The narrative will probably frustrate most people with more than one brain cell. I wish I could end on a better note, but the game is what it is now…