The Goblin’s Brides [Final][v1.0] [TrustyOldPatches]

Please add more chapter or continue this game Or build like this one

Decent attempt for a first try – if it’s a one man team I’d understand a bit more.

However, most of the choices involve 1 girl. Most of the back half of the story makes us think we’re going to lose the elf and the demon girls. You introduced a slut mother character who while married/separated is actively fucking the blacksmith (and should properly have been in a Harem style game, a potential LI alongside her daughter) The ginger minge magic character is barely in it all that much – though I give points for at least making her a bit more interesting when she appears at all/more open minded.

The witch character really should have also been able to join the Harem; and frankly so should Main Girl’s prudish little sister. All of them should have ended up married and pregnant. (I did reach that end, and I’m not sure it was made clear that they all were either legally married, or felt that way at heart) The endings do feel a bit rushed; there really doesn’t need to be Anal in a goblin based game where most of them ARE about gaining a harem/breeding one and or keeping it. The story is to a point, barely there to start. I do think you could have gotten into the actual politics of the Elven war, as a means to provide two schools of thoughts where the Goblin would over time, soften the elf princess’ harder edge and spoiled nature by presenting a commoner’s point of view about the harsh realities she wasn’t going to face as a royal born. She could have her own points of views about flawed tactics, and better practices from the legal/war based stand points and she wouldn’t necessarily need to be wrong – BUT the goblin could still challenge her to ask well how would you do better. She could take time to think on that, and either admit she doesn’t know to give him a hand up to help her come up with overall more viable solutions in the long run = thus impressing her, or he could nudge her to improve and she’ll spark to it over time. As she grows upon this actual “Adventure” that she really wasn’t expecting to be on.

I will also say demon girl and elf ice princess didn’t really need to be lovers at all. It’s fine to include that content (and more especially in a runthrough of the game where the Player picks choices that INTENTIONALLY fuck the goblin over – which I do laud you include by the way) BUT the game is a harem. It’s focused on a harem path. Which means their focus whether they like the goblin or not, should always first and foremost BE on the goblin. Sharing is NOT Harem. Any sex where there is more than each girl singularly with the goblin, is more properly sharing. It’d be fine if they were all patiently waiting for their turn one at a time. He takes them all, and that’s still technically an “orgy” scene. While being focused on the Harem point. But I digress. I can harp on to the end of time and none of you devs really ever seem to hear it. Or maybe it just seems that way.

Overall, for a very niche taste, in an already niche market, it is a good game. A bit rushed toward the end, but maybe you didn’t know where you wanted to go with it. Maybe you ran out of funds to help develop it, or moved toward a new project. Either way, it does at least count as finished. Which is a lot more than most of these games do ever get. So that’s something.