Lineage or Legacy [Ch.4 Act II] [Biting The Bullet]

please update the game

wow just great game!!

I’d have to agree, it’s rather implausible that the bullies would stay away for 2 whole years while MC was “improving.” I’d add on that there’s NO point to Kaylee or whatever the Asian looking geek girl who buggers off from the “coffe date” while MC is getting the crap beaten out of him by her stalker (more because you as the DEV want to pile on than any sort of sense in the story – Jeez man, you couldn’t even let the poor bastard have a fucking coffee with ONE girl who wasn’t remotely guaranteed yet? = Did you READ your own game’s title??? Because that is not the path that provides Lineage. And the only legacy that provides is abject humiliation. Her jetting on him does not put her in any better a light by the way, did she not have a phone? If she heard what the hell was going on, she could have called the cops and literally ended her own problem as well as paid MC fairly back for the save earlier…) even being on the list. You made the choice for her to blow it off; so god knows what she’s been up to, and who wit,h for how long since that point. For all MC knows she could be a massive party girl/super freak slut now. That’s not a good idea to start any sort of “romance path.” With anyone. Also, Mikeala’s not even on the list – so why force us to interact with the bitch. Otherwise it seems like skipped content. Frankly, START MC OFF as the Demi Chad you sort of kind of turn him into by the end. He can still be the almost cool guy that looks like he really should be; can defend himself and IS a nerd/geek/adorkable at heart. Better start off point.

There’s also the fact the first actual sex scene I got to, was way too fast DTF; and it glitched out before it got to the “good part” so it actually skipped all of anything I might have invested in. Med Student doesn’t necessarily intant ONS girl. It would be better to have actual progression to invest in the girls. Other than that, what’s the point? First thing I’d fix is your intro and time scale. He’s either a dead man, or she’s a porn star with no contact and that’s not condusive to her being in the list of affection a all. Next thing I’d work on is not getting your H Scenes to glitch out and skip over. A little bit of ribbing is fine but man; you do know what Respect is, right? The word isn’t spelled “I Have To Be Everybody’s Bent Over Little Bitch.” Nor is being rude when it’s not been duly earned anywhere near appropriate. Also, checking out a hot girl’s ass when she’s willingly in MC’s dorm and knows what’s going to happen because SHE wants it to, is NOT rude. It’s quite normal, to I’d argue, very much expected.

There’s also the point that if you want to make Teacher Boy seem less passive aggressive and seem instead like he actually has some authority in his own goddamn classroom when Mikala tries to sex kitten it up; have him say “Little Girl, I’m Tenured. It doesn’t matter who your mommy or your daddy is. The school can’t get rid of me without a DAMNED good reason.” Then have him say when she walks out the door, before she leaves his presence “And the next time you think you can threaten me with sexual assault charges, remember… it’d be a real shame if you were to have a sudden unfortunate accident.” [Implying she’s got to be ALIVE to do so… and he might be more dangerous than she wants to wrestle with. Without actually threatening her directly. Since accidents can happen anywhere and he need not necessarily be involved. It’s plausible deniability – to scare her off, and it doesn’t make him look simpering or stupid] It would also be implied the same might happen if she DOES tell her parents on him. You could even spin it as he got that tenure with possible mob connections or he’s using the teaching gig as a cover. Since you involved Vets for basically no reason (and not everyone who goes to a fighting club would necessarily have served…) Maybe he’s black ops and has that training. Either way man… multiple things to fix. I’d recommend at best to wait for a few updates if anyone else wants to try this game. If you can handle the denegration of the MC fair enough, but it’s not really in a playable state at the moment.

The game is not bad…maybe to many exclusive paths…choosing to go to one place you completely loose the possibility to meet other girls…not very consistent with a school setting. Same with main story…Mc is bullied…but somehow the bullies give him a 2 years break, has some minor bruises not requiring hospital and claimed to be “gone in a few weeks” but 2 years later still has them.
Creator is updating the renders…it is strongly needed. Girls don’t look attractive at all, in most cases they look like some low budget trans and you expect them to pull out their dick at any moment.
No big story but guess after rework could be pleasant to play.