Juno’s Task [Ch.5.1] [JoJozz]

First and foremost: You designed a game where the main goal is to get girls pregnant. The mom and the sister – and then you set the fucker up to FAIL because you introduce an opposing goddess (which is bullshit = the goddess that wants us to complete the task DOES NOT give us any actual freaking help to win the girls over – and that is more because 99% of the game is cock teasing to build a story I guarantee at least 75% of your gaming audience will either actively skip through, or not give a flying fuck about. Because even if you pay attention it makes NO FUCKING SENSE)

There are SEVERAL mistakes you’ve made with this game so far, BECAUSE you chose to design it as a harem (it should NOT need a mod to allow me the choices that actually MAKE it a Harem, Jesus Christ that’s the first dumb mistake) I SHOULD NOT have to pick between girls at ANY point in the story. At all. The goal was to impregnate BOTH Mom and Sis characters, so I have no fucking clue why you’d design it so that picking one discounts the other at any point in the game.

Femdom = Can fuck right off and die in a fire. I care less that you make this guy a simpering bitch to a goddess [Though that can ALSO fuck right off – she NEEDS him and she should bloody know it] than I do that you put in ANY path that has that content, and DID NOT WARN THE PLAYER BEFOREHAND WHICH ONE DID. Calista and her brats can all fuck right off as far as I’m concerned; BECAUSE I LIKE TO BE THE DOMINANT. So if you want to fix this path – GIVE. THE. MC. THE. POWER. TO. TURN. THE. TABLES!!! Immediately.

* She does NOT get to hit MC during any sort of sexual scene. Violence is NOT okay, no matter which fucking gender it involves and it has NO place in the god damned bedroom. I don’t even like choking content because of how easy it is to fuck up. It’s NOT a turn on. Any girl that remotely tries to chain me down, or hit me during sex is going to pay DEARLY for it. I frankly would have nothing to do with anyone that even vaguely mentions a taste for female domination; because it has nothing to do with Dominance. They don’t know how to control. They know humiliation and again pain. To them, that’s what dominance is = that’s so very, very flawed. Sue me, I’m Half Irish and I expect my girl will be able to handle herself equally, the druids used to take their women into battle, and we’d fuck to try and get pregnant first… but that does NOT mean she gets any sort of right to hit me. Not without fair return. There’s a reason dominants seek submission. There’s a good reason you should always ASK BEFOREHAND if the player wants to see that bullshit content. You will trigger a lot of potential subscribers that way, and you do not need to. It’s an unforced error.

You write at least half to most of the girls to be very explicitly open sexually. Or at least almost instantly DTF. I do not know why you’d bother pitting Lia and Natalya against each other so fiercely without giving the player to tell them to fuck off and deal with the fact he wants them BOTH. (If it leads to an MFF scene down the road, fine, but god damn it do not make me choose between them. HAREM. Harem. Fucking H-A-R-E-M! Which is ALSO why Juno gets to fuck right off with threatening the champion she NEEDS to want to help her, because he expresses an interest in daughters she DID NOT NEED TO HAVE in the first place… he’s a lust champion for fuck sakes and they’re would be fertility goddess’. Not hard math that’s a recipe for disaster. So you’re an asshole for coding ANY scene where Juno is not open to sharing EVERYTHING she has.

On that topic: Why in the ever living fuck did you create a dark path that doesn’t involve Juno. I should NOT need a mod to take both goddess and the lesser power, and turn said lesser power to MY SIDE. Jesus fucking Christ it’s like you guys never think, Hmmm… we designed a game where the main goal is impregnation explicitly of AS MANY GIRLS AS POSSIBLE… so let’s actually make it possible WITHOUT FUCKING MODS to allow the player to PURSUE ANY GIRL I CHOOSE!!! Goddess or not. And on a side note I swear to fuck if you do not let me bend Freya over by the end and breed her senseless as my eternal slave then you’re just being dicks who do not know how to right a proper victory state. Freya DID NOT need to exist, and since she does THAT is the ONLY way I’d call it a happy ending. I repeat again, HAREM is in the fucking tags. So I win her over, and get to keep ALL of the girls who I will impregnate by the end, or you have failed at your own endgame.

Also – REALLY. REALLY FUCK YOU for the pregnancy test bullshit that early in the game. Especially when you know what the god damned task is supposed to be. You’re just screwing with the audience’s heads for no reason when you pull shit like that. It’s not clever. It’s not cute. It’s just assholish. End of the day, in a harem the MC gets ALL of the girls that the player chooses to pursue. Because the player chooses to pursue them. If you don’t understand that concept I have no clue why you’d write a game which has the set up yours has. It’s patent made to be a harem. If you wanted it to be a dating sim, the goal should have been make ONE girl fall truly in love with MC and get pregnant. Then give the player the list of available girls from the start with a rendered model and a personality bio; and let things go from there. You didn’t do that, and there’s still no reason I should need to waste more gigs downloading a Mod just to be able to actually get Harem style content.

The game is quite enjoyable and nuts as these types of games are. The only real drawback is one that I wish would go away as once you use the very, very, very good walkthrough+incest mod, you’re forever mod-locked so you’re waiting not only for the game to update but then for the mod to get updated. And god-forbid if the mod-maker stops updating, you’ll have to start over completely. Just put walkthroughs into the game! The incest patches generally never have to be updated or get locked into the save so you’re good once.

A fairly well done VN with a huge caveat; the MC is a total and complete beta male. So, be prepared that as per the usual beta male script, the women run the show and direct everything–they have to in order for anything to happen! The beta male, as usual, drags his feet, is a big downer and a wet towel.

For example, for the first scene when the MC meets his Mom and Sister for the first time since he was a child. The women are in awe (Of course–required support for the beta male inferiority complex) and immediately start putting their hands on him. The beta male–for his part–responds with, “I’m really tired. I need to go take a nap.” — No, I’m not kidding.

In the second intimate’ish scene, the Mom comes on to the MC strong, snuggling up while wearing skimpy evening-wear. She tells him straight out she wants him and can’t control herself (again, necessary dialog for the beta male’s weak ego–he needs to hear this sort of stuff to feel more confident). She then–of course–initiates the kiss on the lips, the biting on his neck (Yes, HE should be doing this to HER–but anyway) while he mews weak stuff to the effect of: “Uh… Um, I don’t know about this…” Then the poor woman literally has to take his hand and put it down her panties while he watches, paralyzed. — And no, this isn’t a parody or meant to be funny.

This result, of course, is in an absolute ZzzZzzzz-type story and VN.

Some advice, Dev: you need to do the direct opposite of all this. *The opposite!* The women need to be HARD to get, not easy. THIS creates the challenge which keeps the player from falling asleep! Turn the MC an alpha male who initiates everything! And, who goes forth to try to seduce these reluctant, resistant, even derisive (in the case of the sister) women. THAT’S what engages players!

The women need to resist, avoid, attempt to shut down, and the MC needs to overcome regardless. THAT what creates the sense of accomplishment at the end. — The prize!

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